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楼主:maya 2007-06-08

这本书拿到手有几个月了,我很喜欢,自己尝试着转为中文,请大家批评.

"睡觉"和"睡觉觉",我个人倾向于后者.日记的语言里肯定是很直白的"睡觉",显得袋熊的日常生活更简单可爱,可是妈妈讲给宝宝听的时候,"睡觉觉"来得口语化.这又涉及到语言的规范化,有的人认为在给孩子讲故事的时候不应该用不规范的词语,如吃饭饭,都是不规范的.

Diary of a wombat

written by Jackie French
illustrated by Bruce Whatley

Angus&Robertson
图片占位:http://xijieonly.bokee.com/inc/IMG_6431%27.jpg

Monday
Morning:Slept.
Afternoon:Slept.
Evening:Ate grass.
  Scratched.
Night:Ate grass.
Slept.

Tuesday
Morning:Slept.
Afternoon:Slept.
Evening:Ate grass.
Night:Ate grass.Decided grass is boring.
Scratched.Hard to reach the itchy bits.
Slept.

Wednesday
Morning:Slept.
Afternoon:Mild cloudy day.
Found the perfect dustbath.
Discovered flat,hairy creature
  invading my territory.
Fought major battle with flat,hairy creature.
Won the battle.
Demanded a carrot.
The carrot was delicious.
Evening:Demanded more carrots.
Chewed hole in door.
Ate carrots.
Scratched.
Went to sleep.

Thursday
Morning:Slept.
Afternoon:Discovered the perfect scratching post.
Evening:Demanded carrots.
No response.
Tried yesterday's hole.
Curiously resistant to my paws.
Bashed up garbage bin till carrots appeared.
Ate carrots.
Began new hole in soft dirt.
Went to sleep.

Friday
Morning:Slept.
Afternoon:Discovered new scratching post.
Also discoverded a new source of carrots.
Evening:Someone has filled in my new hole.
Soon dug it out again.
Night:Worked on hole.

Saturday
Morning:Moved into new hole.
Afternoon:Rainde.
New hole filled up with water.
Moved back into old hole.
Evening:Discovered even more carrots.
Never knew there were so many carrots in the world.
Carrots delicious.
Night:Finished carrots.
Slept.

Sunday
Morning:Slept.
Afternoon:Slept.
Evening:Slept.
Night:Offered carrots at the back door.
Why would I want carrots when I feel like rolled oats?
Demanded rolled oats instead.Human failed to understand my simple request.
Am constantly amazed how dumb humans can be.
Chewed up one pair of boots,three cardboard boxes, eleven flower pots and a garden chair till they got the message.
Ate rolled oats.
Scratched.Went to sleep.

Monday
Morning:Slept.
Afternoon:Felt energetic.
Wet things flapped against my nose on my way to the back door.
Got rid of them.
Demanded oats AND carrots.
Only had to bash the garbage bin for five minutes before they arrived.
Evening:Have decided that humans are easily trained and make quite good pets.
Night:Dug new hole to be closer to them.
Slept.

#2 maya 2007-06-08

请大家多提意见:)谢谢

Monday星期一

Morning:Slept.早上:睡觉觉
Afternoon:Slept.下午:睡觉觉
Evening:Ate grass.晚上:吃青草
  Scratched.挠痒痒
Night:Ate grass.夜里:吃青草
Slept.睡觉觉

Tuesday星期二

Morning:Slept.早上:睡觉觉
Afternoon:Slept.下午:睡觉觉
Evening:Ate grass.晚上:吃青草
Night:Ate grass.Decided grass is boring.夜里:吃青草,青草乏味又无聊
Scratched.Hard to reach the itchy bits.挠啊挠,老是够不着痒痒的地方
Slept.睡觉觉

Wednesday星期三
Morning:Slept.早上:睡觉觉
Afternoon:Mild cloudy day.下午:天气有点儿阴阴的
Found the perfect dustbath.泥巴里洗个澡真是舒服又开心
Discovered flat,hairy creature invading my territory.有块毛茸茸的东西入侵我的地盘
Fought major battle with flat,hairy creature.和他拼一架
Won the battle.我赢了
Demanded a carrot.可不可以有根胡萝卜尝尝啊
The carrot was delicious.胡萝卜才是美味又好吃
Evening:Demanded more carrots.可不可以再多点胡萝卜呢
Chewed hole in door.把门咬出一个小洞来
Ate carrots.吃到了胡萝卜
Scratched.挠痒痒
Went to sleep.睡觉觉

Thursday星期四
Morning:Slept.早上:睡觉觉
Afternoon:Discovered the perfect scratching post.下午:这里蹭痒痒真舒服
Evening:Demanded carrots.晚上:可不可以来些胡萝卜啊
No response.没人理
Tried yesterday's hole.到昨天的小洞里去试试
Curiously resistant to my paws.怎么爪子伸不进去啊
Bashed up garbage bin till carrots appeared.我打我打我使劲拍打垃圾桶,除非让我看到胡萝卜
Ate carrots.吃胡萝卜
Began new hole in soft dirt.再在软土中挖个新的洞
Went to sleep.去睡觉觉

Friday星期五
Morning:Slept.早上:睡觉觉
Afternoon:Discovered new scratching post.下午:又找到一个新的挠痒痒的好地方
Also discoverded a new source of carrots.还发现了一个新的有胡萝卜的地方
Evening:Someone has filled in my new hole.晚上:有人把我的新洞填掉了
Soon dug it out again.我飞快地又挖好了
Night:Worked on hole.晚上:我挖我挖

Saturday星期六
Morning:Moved into new hole.早上:搬到新洞了
Afternoon:Rained.下午:下雨了
New hole filled up with water.雨水注满了我的新洞
Moved back into old hole.我又搬到以前的那个洞
Evening:Discovered even more carrots.晚上:我发现了更多的胡萝卜
Never knew there were so many carrots in the world.真不敢相信啊,这个世界上有这么多的胡萝卜
Carrots delicious.胡萝卜是美味的
Night:Finished carrots.夜里:干完了所有的胡萝卜
Slept.睡觉觉

Sunday星期天
Morning:Slept.早上:睡觉觉
Afternoon:Slept.下午:睡觉觉
Evening:Slept.晚上:睡觉觉
Night:Offered carrots at the back door.夜里:后门又来了些胡萝卜
Why would I want carrots when I feel like rolled oats?为什么当我喜欢上了燕麦,我还要胡萝卜呢?
Demanded rolled oats instead.Human failed to understand my simple request.我现在换上燕麦口味了,人啊总是不明白我简单的小要求
Am constantly amazed how dumb humans can be.真是让我惊讶呀人到底有多笨蛋
Chewed up one pair of boots,three cardboard boxes, eleven flower pots and a garden chair till they got the message.
Ate rolled oats.他们不知道我又咬坏了一双靴子,三个纸盒,11个花盆,一把花园的椅子.
Scratched.Went to sleep.挠痒痒,然后,睡觉觉

Monday星期一
Morning:Slept.早上:睡觉觉
Afternoon:Felt energetic.下午:我精力充沛无比
Wet things flapped against my nose on my way to the back door.回到后门的路上,有什么湿乎乎的拍在我鼻子上
Got rid of them.把它消灭掉
Demanded oats AND carrots.我又要燕麦又要胡萝卜
Only had to bash the garbage bin for five minutes before they arrived.趁他们还没来,我怒殴垃圾桶五分钟
Evening:Have decided that humans are easily trained and make quite good pets.晚上:我发誓:人是很容易训练成为好的宠物的.
Night:Dug new hole to be closer to them.夜里:又挖了个新洞,我想靠人更近些嘛
Slept.睡觉觉

#3 maya 2007-06-08

不好意思,我发错地方了,应该是绘本.另外,图片也太大了

只能劳驾斑竹辛苦了.谢谢:)

#4 火棘果子 2007-06-09

睡觉睡觉睡觉
啊,我希望天天过这样的生活!

#5 sweater7 2007-06-13

只看到一张图……

#6 流火 2007-06-14

Night:Ate grass.Decided grass is boring.夜里:吃青草,青草乏味又无聊
Scratched.Hard to reach the itchy bits.挠啊挠,老是够不着痒痒的地方

挠啊挠,痒痒的地方够不着
HAHA我是顺口溜爱好者

#7 流火 2007-06-14

我也只看到一张图
看起来很棒

#8 火棘果子 2007-06-22

引用:
引用第5楼流火于2007-06-14 18:04发表的  :
Night:Ate grass.Decided grass is boring.夜里:吃青草,青草乏味又无聊
Scratched.Hard to reach the itchy bits.挠啊挠,老是够不着痒痒的地方

挠啊挠,痒痒的地方够不着
非常棒!

#9 maya 2007-06-25

哈哈,流火,我也喜欢顺口溜样子的...

#10 maya 2007-06-25

又:我翻拍的片子发灰,影响了原图的色彩,加上图片老大的...有时间了,我把图片贴上来给大家分享.
目前已经把书的版权信息交给了一家文化公司,他们找到有兴趣的出版社的话可以去代做引进.我只是贴来给大家看看,尤其要流火这样给顺口溜什么的.
我好喜欢小书房,可惜来得少...我有看到这里斑竹翻译出版的,还买了两本送给即将上学的小朋友..呵呵