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译文： 第四次修改

一只大黑猫的故事

从前，有个小男孩儿，他叫丁丁, 这有一个
图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_1efd031026e64b0.jpg                用它来代表丁丁。

丁丁的房子不是很结实。所以，他在一边儿筑起了一道墙，像这样

图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_63be40efdcb0e55.jpg

然后，他又在另一边儿也筑起了一道墙

图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_19c0daebd2978b9.jpg
现在，丁丁的房子里,就有两个漂亮的房间了，虽然不是很大。   接着，他在两个房间里，一边儿安了一扇窗，看

图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_32fdca270a482f6.jpg    这样就能欣赏外边的风景了。

然后，丁丁在房顶的一边儿盖了一栋高高的烟囱

图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_83ae1b85a3ea975.jpg 。

那么另一边儿呢，也盖起了一栋高高的烟囱

图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_a252938b51130ea.jpg

紧接着，丁丁在家门旁种了青草，像这样

图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_8187dea104c6273.jpg

离丁丁家不远，住着一个小女孩儿，叫思思，这里有一个
图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_bc950766fe9b290.jpg  来代表思思。

当丁丁把房子修好以后，他想去找思思，想和她说说他都做了些什么，于是，他离开家，沿着这条通向思思家的路向前走着。像这样

图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_a28aa4ccace7787.jpg

思思见到丁丁后很高兴，丁丁来到厨房，坐了下来，开始和思思谈起，自己是怎么给房子筑的两道新墙，怎么安的窗子，怎么盖的两栋高高的烟囱，还有怎么在自家门前种的青草。 “思思“，丁丁说“你到我家来吧，看看我把房子翻修的有多棒”。

“好，我这就去拿帽子，马上和你走”思思说；但是，当她准备出发的时候，她说：“我们可以先到地窖去，拿一些苹果路上吃”。

于是，他们来到地窖，像这样

图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_77cd62fa0c07b86.jpg

他们拿了一些苹果，从地窖口上来，来到户外
图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_dbcc76959d2e36c.jpg

现在，他们向丁丁家进发，但是，他们实在太不顺了，刚走了几步，就摔倒了，像这样

图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_3e7bbaea142e772.jpg

不过，他们很快就爬了起来

图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_8566272e6b70991.jpg

他们继续往前走，在快到丁丁家的时候，他们又摔倒了
图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_0d3dad7de34f9be.jpg

他们刚站起来

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没走几步，就又摔了一跤

图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_30ea1c9ce2e53da.jpg

不过，他们已经离丁丁家很近了。丁丁和思思爬起来，走进花园，一直朝房门走去。
图片占位：http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/p_w_upload/Day_090502/100_10740_0e6f2dea37e9af3.jpg

这时，思思惊叫着指向门前的台阶：“噢，天呐，快看，一只大——黑——猫！" (谢谢德邻)

谢谢囡囡妈妈，coffeecat，再再次修改的译文 ：））谢谢两位，学到了很多。

译文： 第三次修改

一只大黑猫的故事

从前，有个小男孩儿，他叫丁丁, 这有一个[p_w_upload=4217]  。用它来代表丁丁。

丁丁的房子不是很结实。所以，他在一边儿筑起了一道墙，像这样
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然后，他又在另一边儿也筑起了一道墙，像这样
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现在，丁丁的房子里就有两个漂亮的房间了，虽然不是很大。接着，他在其中一个房间里安了一扇窗，以便能看到外边的风景，就像这样子
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当然，另一个房间也安了一扇窗，像这样
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然后，丁丁在房子的一边盖了一个高高的烟囱，看 
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那么另一边呢，也盖起了一个高高的烟囱，像这样
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那以后，丁丁在家门旁种了青草，像这样
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离丁丁家不远，住着一个小女孩儿，叫思思，这里有一个[p_w_upload=4225]  来代表思思。

当丁丁把房子修好以后，他想去找思思，想和她说说他都做了些什么，于是，他离开家，沿着这条通向思思家的路向前走着。像这样
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思思见到丁丁后很高兴，丁丁来到厨房，坐了下来，开始和思思谈起自己是怎么给房子筑的两道新墙，怎么安的窗子，怎么盖的两栋高高的烟囱，还有怎么在自家门前种的青草。 “思思“，丁丁说“我想给你看看我的家”。

“好，我这就去拿帽子，马上和你走”思思说；但是，当她准备出发的时候，她说：“我们可以先到地窖去，拿一些苹果路上吃”。

于是，他们来到地窖，像这样
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他们拿了一些苹果，从地窖口上来，来到户外，像这样
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现在，他们向丁丁家进发，但是，他们实在太不顺了，刚走了几步，就摔倒了，像这样
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不过，他们很快就爬了起来，像这样
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他们继续往前走，在快到丁丁家的时候，他们又摔倒了，像这样
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他们还没站起来就又被自己的脚绊倒了，像这样
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他们再次摔倒，像这样
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但是，现在，他们已经在丁丁家附近了，所以，他们站起来，走进花园，一直朝房门走去，像这样
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这时，思思惊叫着指向门前的台阶：“噢，天呐，快看，一只大大的黑猫咪！”

来源
老橡树的童话
http://www.mainlesson.com/display.php?author=johnson&book=oak&story=cat&PHPSESSID=c9ec2da7ca99d03869eb76df9a0b26ed

作者：Clifton Johnson  柯里夫顿 乔纳森

原文：图片所占空间太大，且不支持复制，所以贴了文字，图片相见网址原文中。

THE TALE OF A BLACK CAT
[12]

O

NCE there was a little boy named Tommy; and there's a . That stands for Tommy.

Tommy's house was not a very good one. So he built a new wall on this side of it.

And then he built a new wall on that side of it.

You can see now that he had two nice rooms in his house, though not very large. Next he put in windows to look out of—one in this room —  and one in that room.

Then he made a tall chimney on this side of his house.

And then he made a tall chimney on the other side of his house.

After that he started some grass beside his door, like this.

Not far away from Tommy's house lived a little girl named Sally;  and there's an  That stands for Sally.

[13] When Tommy had finished his house he thought he would like to go and tell Sally what he had been doing,  so he came out of his door and walked along, this way, over to where she lived.

Sally was glad to see him, and he went into the kitchen and sat down and explained to her how he had built two new walls to his house and put in windows and made two tall chimneys, and how he had started the grass in front of his door. "And now, Sally," said he, "I want you to come over and see how well I've fixed things."

"I'll put on my bonnet and go right back with you," said Sally; but when she was ready to start she said, "We might go down cellar first and get some apples to eat on the way."

So they went down cellar, like this.

[14] They got some apples, and then they came up outdoors by the hatchway, like this.

Now they started for Tommy's house, but the walking was bad, and they had gone only a few steps when they tumbled down, like this.

However, they were quickly up, like this.

And they walked along until they were nearly to [15] Tommy's house when the tumbled again, like this.

And they were no sooner up on their feet, like this,

than they tumbled down once more, like this.

But they were nearly to Tommy's house now, and [16] they got up and were going into the yard straight toward the door, like this,

—when Sally pointed toward the doorstep and cried out, "O-o-o-o-o-o-oh! See that big BLACK CAT!"