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孩子的守护天使

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楼主:夜莺 2009-08-13

看到的是英文,很喜欢,这篇是自己翻译的^^
        很久很久以前,有一个小孩子即将诞生在地球上。一天,他问上帝:“他们告诉我,你明天就要把我送到地球上,但是在那里,我这么小,又没有人帮助我,我要怎么办呢?” 
 
        上帝回答道:“我将为你精心挑选一位天使,她将会一直围绕在你的身旁,照顾你,关心你。” 
 
        然而孩子仍然不能决定自己是否真的愿意到那里去,“那么你能不能告诉我,在天堂这里,我可以快乐的歌唱和微笑,不必做其它任何事情,在那里,我还可以如此的开心吗?”  
  
      “你的天使每一天都会为你歌唱,为你微笑,你会感受到你的天使的给你的爱,并为此而感到幸福。”

“当他们和我说话时,我要怎样理解他们呢?”孩子继续问道:“在那里我能不能听懂他们的语言 呢?”  
  
        上帝轻轻拍了一下孩子的头,说:“你的天使将会耐心并仔细地带给你你从未听过的甜美的语言,她将教会你怎样做。” 
  
       “可是当我想和你说话的时候我要怎么做呢?” 
  
         上帝仍然回答了这个问题:“你的天使将会和你在一起并教会你怎样祈祷与我相见。”  
  
       “我曾经听说,在地球上,有坏人呢!如果我遇到坏人,谁来保护我呢?” 
  
       “你的天使将会保护你,即使冒着生命的危险。” 
    
       “可是如果见不到你,我会哭泣的。”孩子小心地说。 
  
        上帝对着孩子微笑:“我会一直在你身边,而且,你的天使将会告诉你关于我的一切,并告诉你怎样回到我的身边。” 
 
         在那一刻,天堂变得寂静万分,从地球传来的声音依稀可辨。孩子知道他很快要开始他的旅程,于是, 他轻轻的问了上帝最后一个问题:“ 我的上帝,我现在必须马上离开,你可以告诉我我的天使的名字 吗?” 
  
         上帝把手温柔地放在孩子的肩膀上,回答道:“你的天使的名字并不难记,你只需简单的叫她一声-- -妈妈。”

#2 囡囡妈 2009-08-13

麻烦楼主,英文原文给一下。。谢谢!

#3 夜莺 2009-08-13

Once upon a time there was a child ready to be born. So one day he asked God,"They tell me you are sending me to earth tomorrow but how am I going to live there being so small and helpless?"

God replied,"Among the many angels, I chose one for you. She will be waiting for you and will take care of you."

But the child wasn't sure he really wanted to go."But tell me, here in Heaven, I don't do anything else but sing and smile, that's enough for me to be happy."

"Your angel will sing for you and will also smile for you every day. And you will feel your angel's love and be happy."

"And how am I going to be able to understand when people talk to me,"the child continued,"if I don't know the language that men talk?"

God patted him on the head and said,"Your angel will tell you the most beautiful and sweet words you will ever hear, and with much patience and care, your angel will teach you how to speak."

"And what am I going to do when I want to talk to you?"

But God had an answer for that question too."Your angel will place your hands together and will teach you how to pray."

"I've heard that on earth there are bad men, who will protect me?"

"Your angel will defend you even if it means risking her life!"

"But I will always be sad because I will not see you anymore,"the child continued warily.

God smiled on the young one."Your angel will always talk to you about me and will teach you the way for you to come back to me, even though I will always be next to you."

At that moment there was much peace in Heaven, but voices from earth could already be heard. The child knew he had to start on his journey very soon. He asked God one more question, softly,"Oh God, if I am about to leave now, please tell me my angel's name."

God touched the child on the shoulder and answered,"Your angel's name is not hard to remember. You will simply call her Mommy."

请问一下,这里发翻译文都要发原文的吗^^

#4 囡囡妈 2009-08-13

"这里发翻译文都要发原文的吗"

恩,如果不发原文,大家怎么来学习译文呢?这里就是研究翻译的地方啊。 表情占位:s:136

#5 盈果 2009-08-13

呵呵,不错不错!

#6 茗风 2009-08-14

楼主再顺一遍中文,有些许小瑕疵,我不说,你看一遍就知道了,呵呵

#7 夜莺 2009-08-14

请问是地球少了一个地字吗?

#8 coffeecat 2009-08-14

不是,我觉得是中文的语感问题。你大声地读一遍试验下?

#9 远行 2009-08-17

很感人的小故事。

译文不错,就是有些地方有些冗长拖沓,比如这句:

“你的天使将会耐心并仔细地带给你你从未听过的甜美的语言”

如猫说的,大声读一遍,你就知道了。

#10 慕容胖胖 2009-08-18

呵呵,好温馨啊