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楼主:乌咪 2009-10-12

恋爱的牙齿    (2009)
BY WUMI 
你一定不知道,你的嘴巴里曾有一只深坠爱河的牙齿。
这只牙齿跟她的兄弟姐妹愉快地生活在一起。每次当你张开嘴巴的时候,阳光照在她那光洁的前额上,她可以借此机会看看外面的世界。她甚至可以感受到你的一呼一吸。
她悄悄地爱上了舌头先生,她简直不能从他身上转移视线!是的,舌头先生真的跟其他的牙齿很不同。那些牙齿们都是白色和象牙色的,有些甚至是褐色的粘着厚厚的可恶的牙垢。。。舌头先生可不同,他是红色的!那鲜红的脸色让他看上去那么特别和有生气。
看上去舌头先生可一丁点都没有留意到着秘密的爱恋,他的生活总是那么繁忙总是在做着些什么——他可是很受欢迎的!
但这隐秘的疯狂的爱让牙齿姑娘丧失理智了,她竟然尝试去靠近舌头先生。当她迈出第一步,那身体最深处传来的剧烈痛楚几乎让她毙命。但她继续向前。她流着血,但她依然微笑着,因为她知道她正一步步走近她的爱。

三,二,一.。。

当她还剩下最后一步的时候,牙齿姑娘不由自主地浑身颤抖。当她突然失去平衡扑向他的时候,她是多么地兴奋莫名。

“你有什么毛病啊,臭婊子!”舌头先生气愤了因为她的阻碍了他品尝那肥润多汁果子。

可怜的牙齿姑娘惊呆了,但她还来不及作出任何反应,舌头先生已经举起他那风度翩翩的脚——也就是鲜红多情的舌尖,把她狠狠踢开。

牙齿姑娘被推出来,掉到冰冷的地面上。湿漉漉的泪水浸透了她全身,她甚至忘记了挣扎。
那时侯你还小,所以你不可能知道这颗牙齿,以及,她唯一的爱情故事。

A Tooth in Love (2005)
BY WUMI

You will never know there lived a tooth in your mouth who was ever in love.
The tooth lived happily with its brothers and sisters. Every time when you opened you mouth, sunshin shone on its satin forehead and it could have a look at the world outside. The tooth could even feel every breath you took.
Secretly the tooth was in love. It couldn't take its eye away from the tongue. Yes , the tongue is very different from the other teeth. Most of them are write or ivory. Some are even brown with thick tartar. It is RED! The colour made it look special and lively.
It seemed the tongue didn't notice the secret love at all. It  was full of life and is always doing things. It's very popular there.
The crazy love drove the teeth insane. It intended to move close to the tongue. When it took the first step, the pang almost killed it. But still went on. It's bleeding, but a smile was on its face because it knew it's getting closer and closer to its love.
Three, two, one...
The tooth couldn't help  trembling when there was only one pace left.
It was so excited that it rushed into the tongue and bit it accidently.
"What's wrong with you, bitch!" the tongue was very angry because the tooth made it lose the chane to taste close to the juicy berry.
The tooth was shocked and it was not given any time to react for the tougue pushed it harshly away from its handsome red body. The poor tooth was pushed out.
It wept with bitter tears when it was lying on the ice-cold groud.
You were young at that time. So you know nothing about the tooth, and its only love story.

#2 简单日子 2009-10-12

表情占位:s:135 哇,好强啊,呵呵!原来我们的的嘴巴里有这么多痴情的女子哦!

#3 暮溶 2009-10-12

这是翻译?还是原创(中英文)?
我喜欢啊。原来,小时候掉牙齿这件事,也可以是这样一个奇妙动人的故事。

#4 乌咪 2009-10-12

表情占位:s:135

#5 乌咪 2009-10-12

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引用第2楼暮溶于2009-10-12 11:56发表的 :
这是翻译?还是原创(中英文)?
我喜欢啊。原来,小时候掉牙齿这件事,也可以是这样一个奇妙动人的故事。

是05年先写了英文,后来翻译成中文的。。。。