好长的英文部分,诗歌的翻译很不容易,加油^_^
不知道能不能赶上圣诞节了,只好先把英文打上来,已经翻译了一部分中文,慢慢贴吧,嘿嘿。红色部分是意义上需要重新考虑的,但总体也要考虑,主要是押韵,好难……
http://www.dreamkidland.cn/leadbbs/read.php?tid-48501.html
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The Old-Fashioned Santa Claus 老派圣诞公公
PICTURE BOOK 绘本
Compiled and Written by PJ. Shaw (编者、作者)P.J.萧
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The Magic of Santa Claus 圣诞老人的魔法
Here’s a nice little story for good girls and boys, 一个小故事,讲给乖孩子:
All about Santa Claus, Christmas and toys… 圣诞老人、圣诞节和玩具……
THE top of the Earth, which is called the North Pole, 高高的北极点,地球最尽头,
Is where Santa Claus lives, a right jolly old soul! 那是圣诞老人的家,快活的好老头!
About him the snow lies so thick on the ground 小屋旁边,雪地千层厚;
That the sun cannot melt it the whole summer round. 夏日将尽,积雪依然如旧。
His twinkling eyes are so merry and bright, 明亮的眼神满是快活,
That they sparkle like two little stars in the night. 像两颗小星星在夜空闪烁,
He has rosy cheeks and the snowiest hair, 两颊红通通,白发如雪灿然,
Though the top of his head is quite shiny and bare. 头顶却光秃秃、亮闪闪。
And each Christmas Eve, from his toes to his chin, 圣诞前夜,圣诞老人裹得严严实实,
Santa’s bundled up tight so the cold can’t creep in. 从下巴颏到脚趾尖,寒冷无法侵袭,
His deer from the mountains are harnessed with care, 驯鹿从高山飞下,挽具齐齐整整,
As they anxiously prance in the clear, frosty air. 急切奔驰于空中,一片晴朗清冷。
Santa cracks his long whip and whistles a tune, 挥动长鞭,吹起口哨,
Then he winks at the stars and he nods to the moon. 向星星眨眼,和月亮点头。
And up, up away they soar, picking up speed, 风驰电掣,越来越高,越来越远,
For their magical journey each Christmas Eve. 年复一年,这是圣诞前夜的魔幻之旅。
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On a starry night in December, Santa’s trip begins. 在一个十二月的星夜,圣诞老人开始旅程。
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The Reindeer’s Flight 飞翔的驯鹿
The reindeer take flight with lightning-fast speed. 以光速,驯鹿在空中奔驰,
In fact, they’re so fast, you’d swear they had wings! 看哪,一闪即过,如生双翼!
And these glorious reindeer can easily fly 再高的屋顶,也不能奈何
To the top of a roof, no matter how high. 俊美的驯鹿一跃即至。
Then, down, down the chimney Santa descends, 啊,顺着烟囱下降,只在
With a snap of his fingers, a wink and a grin. 一弹指,一眨眼,一咧嘴之间。
He has to be quick, to be through in a night. 快快的呀,只有这一夜,
His gifts must arrive before first-morning light! 第一缕晨光之前,礼物就要送到。
So he fills up the stockings with trinkets and toys, 一点儿声响也无,
All without making the teeniest noise. 长袜塞满小饰品和玩具。
And with tinkling bells, on each snowy rooftop, 骄傲的驯鹿,佩戴清脆鸣铃,
The proud reindeer wait – and keep the night watch. 守候于一个个雪白的屋顶。
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Down, down the chimney, Santa descends. 顺着烟囱,圣诞老人向下,再向下。
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A Wondrous Christmas Eve 美妙的圣诞前夜
Santa is cheerful but pleasantly shy. 该多快活,偷看一眼好老头,
(He likes to do all his good deeds on the sly.) 放弃小睡,在这长长的冬季。
So there’s no use in spoiling a long winter’s nap 只是,乐呵呵的老人,不习惯张扬,
Attempting a peek at this jolly old chap. 总在暗夜,做着好事一桩桩。
No, when Christmas Eve comes you must slip into bed, 所以,要乖乖的,在圣诞前夜,
Pull up the covers and lay down your head. 爬上床,盖好被,早早进入梦乡。
Then Santa arrives with his magical pack – 圣诞老人会准时到来,背着魔袋,
A bag full of playthings slung over his back! 各种各样的小玩艺,满满一袋。
He gives to young children who lives everywhere, 所有孩子,不论贫富。
And the rich and the poor are alike in his care, 在他眼里,全无差别,
So great is his love for all girls and boys, 他的爱是如此深沉,
That making them happy is what he enjoys. 孩子快乐,他就快乐。
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Watching and waiting for Santa’s sleigh. 眼巴巴等候圣诞老人的雪橇。
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The Spirits of Christmas 圣诞精灵
The most wondrous presents and toys are designed 孩子,乖乖的、温柔的小孩子,
For good little children, the gentle and kind. 最精妙的礼物和玩具为你们而准备。
And when Christmas comes round, as it does once a year, 年复一年,圣诞如期而至,
It’s certain that Santa will somehow appear! 圣诞老人也会如约到来!
How funny he looks as he sits on the floor, 多么好玩,他坐在地板上,
Pulling out toys and then searching for more. 掏出玩具,又继续摸索,
His cheeks are flushed pink and his eyes starry bright – 脸颊红润,眼睛如星般璀璨,
He certainly makes quite a comical sight. 看到他,怎能让人不开怀。
His elves help him make such incredible things – 精灵帮他造玩具,如此奇妙:
Monkeys and acrobats jumping on strings, 小猴和杂技小人在绳上跳,
Footballs and baseballs and mystery games, 足球、棒球还有神秘的游戏,
Chocolates and lockets and sweet candy canes. 巧克力、吊坠盒和甜甜的糖棒。
And, oh! the dear dollies with long, curly hair,啊,还有那可爱的玩具娃娃,
That open their eyes or sit up in a chair;长长卷发,眼睛扑闪,坐在椅上,
With jackets and socks and the tiniest shoes,小外套,小短袜,小而又小的鞋子,
And ribbons and hair clips that doll-babies use.缎带,发卡,装扮着娃娃。
All the long year, with his paint and his glue, 整整一年,用涂料和胶水,
Santa is making these presents for you! 圣诞老人为你们准备礼物!
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Dollies with petticoats, buttons and bows. 穿着小衬裙、着小钮扣、戴着蝴蝶结的玩具娃娃
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Santa’s List 圣诞老人的美德列表Just in case you’re longing to know, 想知道怎样做一个好孩子?
These are the virtues good children must show: 下面是圣诞老人的美德列表:
Be hard-working at school and gentle at play, 努力学习,玩耍却不打闹,
Respectful to others, and kind through the day. 尊敬他人,一直对人和善。
Not angry or sullen, snobbish or curt. 不发脾气,不耍性子,不自命不凡,也不粗暴,
Not one to call names or say things to hurt. 不骂粗话,也从不讲让人受伤的话。
Obedient, cheerful, and eager to please. 听爸爸妈妈的话,开开心心,也愿意让别人快乐,
Not one to whine, or tell lies, or tease. 不大哭大闹,既不撒谎,也不取笑他人。
A child who has opened his heart to believe 真诚地相信,比接受
That it’s truly more blessed to give than receive. 更为高尚的是付出。
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Santa makes his list. 圣诞老人正在写美德列表。
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SANTA CLAUS’S PALACE AND TOY FACTORY. 圣诞老人的宫殿和玩具工厂
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The Crystal Toy Factory 水晶玩具工厂
To have enough playthings to fill up his sleigh, 希望雪橇满载好玩的小玩意儿,
Santa must work with his elves every day. 圣诞老人和精灵天天辛勤工作。
His workshop’s a factory, so grand and so fair – 大大的工厂是他的作坊,美轮美奂——
A real crystal palace set high in the air! 真正的水晶作成,在云际天边!
The walls are constructed of crystalline ice 冰围四壁,晶莹剔透,
That outshines the rays of the big Northern Lights. 辉煌的北极光,也黯然失色。
And inside these bustling rooms all day long, 个个房间,从早到晚,精灵们
The elves do their work while they sing merry songs. 忙忙碌碌,以欢快的歌声为伴。
These good-hearted helpers know 这些好心的帮手
just how to make… 手艺精巧:
Trumpets and swords and the best roller skates. 喇叭、剑和最好的溜冰鞋,Trains that can run on the tiniest tracks. 带缩微轨道的火车,
Soccer balls, marbles and fun jumping jacks. 足球、弹子和木偶小人,Paint boxes, crayons and birds that take flight. 颜料盒、铅笔和飞动的小鸟,Puzzles and books to be seized with delight. 拼图、小人书(孩子一见扑过来)Soldiers and horses and pull-toys galore… 小兵、马儿和小拉车,令人眼花缭乱……
Are hammered and sanded 锤呀锤,磨呀磨,
and sent out the door! 大家出门喽!
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The workshop is such a wondrous place. 迷人的小工坊!
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Toys and Treasures 玩具与财宝
NOW the workshop is such a miraculous place, 马儿快步跑,娃娃小腿迈,
With stockpiles of satin and ribbon and lace, 泰迪熊,一摇一摇抱满怀。
Horses that gallop and dollies that walk, 蕾丝、丝带和绸缎,
And teddy-bears ready to cuddle and rock. 魔幻工坊真魔幻!
Games for all reasons, scooters and kites, 滑板和风筝,各色小游戏,
And books that talk back or pop up – what a sight! 会说话的书,“啪啪”站起来,
Too many baseballs and footballs to count, 红色小单车,骑上四处行,
And two-wheeled, red bicycles ready to mount. 棒球和足球,数也数不清。
There are farmyards complete with their fences and trees. 农场里,篱笆环绕,树木遍地,
Cows, sheep and oxen, all standing at ease. 猪圈里,小小猪仔,哼哼昂昂,
Turkeys and ducks and fine chickens and hens, 奶牛、公牛与绵羊,恬然站立,
And dear little piggies to put in their pens. 小鸡、肥鸭和火鸡,圆圆壮壮,
Each Noah’s Ark is sent on its way 诺亚方舟已启航,
With nice little animals, ready to play. 满载小动物,你欢我闹,
Lions and tigers and camels and bears – 狮子和老虎,骆驼与黑熊,
Two of each kind, since they travel in pairs! 雌雄成双,一对一对向前行!
(这一段的翻译在押韵上我比较满意,但音节依然不够铿锵,最后一段尤其处理不好。)
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Christmas Lullaby 圣诞催眠曲
IN a cradle so dainty, a warm cozy nest, 可爱的小摇篮,温暖又舒适,
Baby, sweet baby, is taking his rest. 宝贝,迷人的小宝贝,甜蜜入睡。
Upon the white pillow his pretty head lies; 脸蛋枕上雪白的小枕头,
Closed for the night are his bonnie blue eyes. 夜了,合上蓝色的眼眸。
The little hand’s dimpled and pink as a rose. 玫瑰粉的小手啊,胖胖乎乎。
And just what he’s dreaming of, nobody knows. 他的梦如此多彩,我们怎能梦见。
Santa peeks at the baby, then leaves him a toy, 圣诞老人偷偷瞅,放下一个小玩具,A cuddly soft doll for a small baby boy. 软绵绵的娃娃,宝宝正好抱满怀。
Then he tiptoes away, as the wee baby seems 小小的宝宝,沉醉在梦之大海;
To be floating away on an ocean of dreams. 圣诞老人,踮着脚尖,微笑离开。
(越翻越觉得诗歌太挑战人了,翻得这么烂,修改会是个大工程呀。)
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Santa peeks at the wee baby. 圣诞老人偷偷瞅着小宝宝。
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Christmas Chorus 圣诞颂歌
WE bless His birth 您从天堂降临人间,
Who came to Earth, 为此我们永远感念。
and in his cradle lowly, 您的摇篮在低贱的处所,
Received the earliest Christmas gifts – 但在那儿,是您,
the Christ Child, pure and holy. 收到第一份圣诞礼物——
圣洁的耶稣。
To Him we offer thanks and praise 您的爱如此深广,
for all the love He bore us. 我们感怀赞颂:
For His dear sake, our hymns we make 高唱圣诞颂歌,
In this, our Christmas chorus. 只为表达万一。
And while we deck these heavy boughs 树干沉沉,枝头满坠,
with all our glittering treasures, 闪烁无数珍宝。
He from above will look with love 在天堂,您心怀慈爱,
upon our simple pleasures. 注视我们纯朴的欢乐。
He gave us friends, 您赐予我们朋友,
our joy He sends, 给予我们快乐,
He ever watches o’er us; 永远守护我们;
He bends His ear, 请侧耳倾听
our song to hear, 我们齐声歌唱,
And loves our 这首圣诞颂歌,
Christmas chorus. 只为让您开怀。
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Seeing and Believing 我们看到了
WHEN Jenny and Jessie woke in the night, 星月灿烂,倾泻天堂的光辉,
The moon and the stars cast a heavenly light. 沐浴其中,女孩从睡梦中醒来。
And all of a sudden there came such a sound – 声响忽然而至——
As if there were somebody moving around! 可是有人四处走动?
"It’s Santa Claus – come down the chimney, I guess,” “啊,是圣诞老人,正从烟囱往下爬。”
In a wondering whisper, said Jenny to Jess. 悄悄猜测,珍妮在杰茜耳边低语。
“Oh, Jenny,’ said Jessie, “let’s carefully sneak “啊,珍妮,让我们沿着走廊,
Down the hall to the living-room doorway and peek!” 走到客厅门口,偷偷瞧上一瞧。”
So they tiptoed like mice to the living-room door, 坚硬的木地板,一声也不出,
Making no sound on the hard wooden floor. 女孩走啊走,活像小老鼠。
Then they drew back the curtain and looked in to see – 拉开窗帘,看哪!
Sure enough! Santa! As plain as could be! 一点没错,圣诞老人!
He stood near the fireplace, facing away, 面朝壁炉,圣诞老人忙忙碌碌
And dozens of toys on the floor near him lay. 玩具摆在地板上,数也数不清。
And since Jenny and Jessie made not one sound, 珍妮和杰茜,大气也不出,
He kept at his work without looking around. 圣诞老人好安心,一点没抬头。
Did they speak to him? Dear, no! They trembled with fear 跟他说句话吧!啊,不!圣诞老人
At the image of Santa Claus being so near. 近在眼前,她们心生恐惧。
One glimpse was enough, then they felt such a fright – 胆怯的小女孩,飞奔回房间,
That back to their beds they flew for the night! 浑身直颤抖,只说一眼已足够。
(这一段尤其不满意)
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Christmas Festivities 欢庆圣诞
GOOD Santa Claus sometimes, in making his rounds, 挨家挨户送礼物,是那好心的圣诞老人。
From a house brightly lighted will hear merry sounds. 明亮的大房子,欢声笑语一阵阵,
And if he suspects that the laughter and noise 跳呀,笑啊,唱啊,闹啊,那可是
Proceeds from a group of young ladies and boys… 无忧无虑的姑娘和小伙?
Curiosity, likely, will tempt him to creep 带着好奇,轻手轻脚,
To some little window through which he can peek. 从小小的窗口向里瞅。
And there, for a while, he will longingly gaze 孩子们,尽情舞蹈做游戏,
At the children who frolic in dances and plays. 窗外,凝视中是满满的渴望。
And if some of the revelers happen to spy 笑闹不休,突然有更大的惊喜——
Santa Claus watching so closely outside – 圣诞老人与他们,近在咫尺!
They’d tumble out laughing and squealing with joy, 该是如何的大笑,怎样的尖叫,
And try to invite in the jolly old boy! 邀请快活的好老头,共同欢闹!
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(背包上的字) SANTA CLAUS (背包上的字)圣诞老人
NORTH POLE 北极点
Santa Claus watches closely outside. 圣诞老人正往里瞅哪。
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Sweet dreams on Christmas Eve. 圣诞前夜,做个好梦。