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楼主:牛牛的天空 2010-02-14

Wake Up, It's Spring!
By Lisa Campbell Ernst
The winter was long, and cold.
Then early one morning
the sun rose and warmed the earth.
"Wake up, old friend, it's Spring!"
whispered the sun.

And the warmed earth woke up.

The earth baskedin the sun's glow.
then nudged its guest, the earthworm.
"Time to wake up. Spring is here!"

And the eatthworm woke up.

The worm wiggled in the warm
earth and sang to its neighbor, the seed:
"Spring is here! Rise and shine!"

And the seed woke up.

The seed sprouted, adn grew out of  the earth.
It called to the sleeping ladybug,
"Wake up! Spread your wings. It is Spring!"

And the ladybug woke up.

The ladybug laughed in the sunshine.
It tickled the rabbit's ear as it whispered,
"Pssst------rabbit! Spring is here!"

And the rabbit woke up.

The rabbit twitched his nose to smell the Spring air.
He thumped to the bird up in her nest.
"Out of bed, sleepyhead. It's Spring!"

And the bird woke up.

The bird soared from above and flew past the sleeping cat.
"Wake up, furry friend,"
the bird chirped. "Spring is here!"

And the cat woke up.

The cat s-t-r-e-t-c-h-e-d her legs and rubbed past the sleeping dog.
She yawned. " It's Spring."

And the dog woke up.

The dog frisked and jumped and barked into the baby's room.
"Wake up! Wake up! It's Spring!" cheered the dog.

And the baby woke up.

The baby stood up in her crib with a laugh and shouted to her brother and sister, "Out! Out! Spring!"

And the brother and sister woke up.

They picked up the baby and ram to their parents' room,
jumped on the bed, and shouted,
"Wake up! Oper your eyes! Spring is here! Spring is here at last!"

And the parents woke up.
(One eye at a time.)

And they all ram to dance together in the sun-----
the parents
and the brother and sister
and the baby
and the dog
and the cat
and the bird
and the rabbit
and the ladybug
and the seed
and worm
and all the earth----

Because it was SPRING!

#2 牛牛的天空 2010-02-14

春天来了,快醒来!

作者: Lisa Campbell Ernst

冬天非常漫长,又非常寒冷.
所有的生物都睡着了.

一天早上
太阳升起来温暖着大地.
"快醒来, 老朋友们, 春天来了!"
太阳低声地说.

暖洋洋的地球醒来了.

地球舒适地晒着太阳,
轻轻地推了推他的客人------蚯蚓.
"该醒醒了, 春天来了!"

蚯蚓醒了过来.

蚯蚓在温暖的土壤里扭动着身体对他的邻居------种子
唱起了歌:"春天来了,快起来晒太阳!"

种子醒了过来.

种子发芽了, 她长出了地面.
她向熟睡的瓢虫喊道:
"快醒来, 展开你的翅膀,春天来了!"

小瓢虫醒了过来.

小瓢虫在阳光下笑了.
她挠着兔子的耳朵低声地说:
"喂, 兔子! 春天来了!"

兔子醒了.

兔子抽动了几下鼻子, 吸了吸春天的空气.
他重重地敲击着树干, 对着树上的鸟窝喊道:
"快起床了, 懒鬼. 春天来了!"

小鸟醒了过来.

小鸟展翅飞过熟睡的小猫.
"快醒了, 穿皮袄的朋友."
小鸟啾啾地叫着."春天来了."

小猫睁开了一只惺忪的眼睛.

小猫懒懒地伸展着四肢,
她爬过去蹭蹭睡着的小狗.
"该起床了."
她打着哈欠.
"春天来了."

小狗醒了过来.
小狗欢快地冲向婴儿的房间, 跳着、叫着。
“快醒醒!快醒醒!春天来了!”

婴儿醒了过来。

婴儿扶着小床的栏杆站了起来,冲着他的哥哥姐姐笑着喊着:
“外面!外面!春天!”

哥哥姐姐们醒了过来。

他们抱着婴儿跑到父母的房间,跳到床上,大声地喊道:
“快醒啦!睁开你们的眼睛!春天来了!春天终于来了!”

他们的父母醒了。
(同时睁开了一只眼睛。)

他们都跑到室外在阳光下跳起了舞------
父母
兄弟姐妹
婴儿
小狗
小猫
小鸟
兔子
瓢虫
种子
蚯蚓
以及所有的生物------

因为春天到了。

#3 囡囡妈 2010-02-15

作者是美国人。。是图画书,不是故事书,以后这类的翻译请归类”绘本翻译“,谢谢!

小宝宝喊的这句"Out! Out! Spring!",OUT指的是外面,还是起床?请查图。。可以考虑小宝宝的语言特点来翻译这句话。

整个文字结构是有重复性的,而且充满动感,翻译上也需要考虑这种重复性。

#4 牛牛的天空 2010-02-15

谢谢!你提的意见很中肯,我也是刚来到这个论坛,还不熟悉。英语水平也有限,只是想试着翻译些读物,锻炼一下自己的能力。希望继续提出宝贵意见。