落花，翻成“蘑菇圈”，是不是意境上少了很多？
还有这句“Very lightly step around;”，我觉得是说那圈上有细碎的脚印，接着前面的，而不是接后面那句的，和你理解的不一样。请查。
If You See a Fairy Ring
by William Shakespeare
If you see a fairy ring
In a field of grass,
Very lightly step around;
Tiptoe as you pass;
Last night fairies frolicked there;
And they're sleeping somewhere near.
If you see a tiny fay
Lying fast asleep,
Shut your eyes and run away,
Do not stay and peep;
And be sure you never tell,
Or you'll break a fairy spell.
要是你看见一个蘑菇圈
莎士比亚
要是你看见一个蘑菇圈
在一片草地上.
可要踮起脚尖,
轻轻地走过.
昨夜小仙子们在此戏嬉;
这会儿正在附近沉沉睡去.
要是你看见一个小仙子
正睡得香,
闭上眼睛快快跑
别停留也别偷看.
还千万不要说出去,
不然你就破了仙子的魔力.