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《The Three Little Pigs 》三只小猪

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楼主:马上行动 2010-03-28

求助翻译《the three little pigs》,这是一本很有名的绘本,三只小猪很多个版本,这个是广收儿童喜爱的插画家steven的作品。

下面的是我按照绘本中的文字打印出来的,这个英文无法讲给孩子听,所以来到这里,求助于大家帮忙翻译成中文。

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Serafina Sow had three piglets to raise. Their names were Percy ,Pete, and Prudence.
Money was tight and times were tough until suddenly one night Serafina had an amazing dream.”I want to bring WAFFLES to the world!”she cried.
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Serafina bolted an old waffle iron onto a set of wheels and installed a system of tanks, pipes ,and hoses .

Then she filled the machine with waffle batter, maple syrup ,butter, and powdered sugar.

Each morning at dawn the family pushed Serafina’s invention from hamlet to hamlet ,delighting passersby with their delicious waffles.
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Soon Serafina was able to enroll her piglets at Hog Hollow Academy .As the years passed, they did her proud in the classroom ,on the basketball court, and in the school plays.

When graduation day finally rolled around, Serafina turned the waffle business over to her family.

“I shall retire to the Gulf of Pasta,” she announced.”If you ever need my help ,you can call me there.”
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The three pigs operated the wafflery while they built new homes nearby. Percy wove straw into a cozy bungalow.

Pete put together a log cabin ,and Prudence constructed a brick cottage . the wafflery continued to prosper ,and life hummed along happily.
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That is ,life hummed along happily until a wolf named Tempesto o showed up.
“Howdy, Haw. Howdy, Bacon. Howdy , Sausage,” he growled .”Butter yourselves and hop on the griddle. I’ll eat you for breakfast.”
  “We only serve waffles ,”replied Pete nervously .”What flavor would you like?”
“I  HATE waffles!” snapped the wolf .  “I want YOU!”
Tempesto o lunged forward . But in his eagerness to grab the pigs ,he overturned the wafflery. Percy, Pete, and  Prudence fled to their houses.
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A few moments later Tempesto o was pounding on the door of Percy’s bungalow. “Open up ,Pork Chop !”he demanded .”Or  I’ll HUFF AND I’ll PUFF and  I’ll  flatten this dump!”
  Percy frantically scribbled a plea for help on a  paper airplane and launched it in the direction of the sheriff’s office .
Suddenly ,with a blast like a typhoon, Tempesto  demolished the straw house, and Percy’s possessions were scattered hither and yon across the county .
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Percy’s paper airplane caught the attention of Sheriff sheep.
But before he could grab  it ,Percy’s bathtub plunged to earth like a meteorite.
Meanwhile ,Percy had reached Pete’s cabin one step ahead of the wolf .”Let me in or I’ll trash this woodpile !”roared  Tempesto o.
“NO!NO!NO!Not by the hair of our chinny chin chins !”cried  Percy and Pete.
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With the force of seventeen chain saws, the wolf reduced the cabin to sawdust.
The two brothers were blown clear to the brick cottage, where  Prudence  whisked the safely inside.
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In a few moments the wolf was battering the door.
“surrender, you cowardly swine!”he bellowed.” Or I’ll huff and I’ll puff and I’ll  blast this pigsty into pebbles!”
“Bombs away!” squealed the pigs. A barrage of watermelons, pumpkins ,cantaloupes ,grapes, and assorted pastries caught  Tempesto o  completely by surprise and knocked him flat.
The wolf sprang to his feet ,flaming with fury.
“this means war!”he hollered.”TOTAL WAR!”
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Throughout the rest of the day sand all that night, Tempesto o savagely bombarded the little cottage.
But ,by the dawn’s early light ,the frustrated wolf could see that the brick walls were still standing .
“it’s time to change tactics ,”he growled.
Tempesto  grabbed a garbage bag and began furiously huffing and puffing .
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The bag swelled like a hot-air balloon and soared aloft.
“Set the table ,piggies!”cried  Tempesto  gleefully.
“Breakfast is served!”
Just then a taxicab pulled up to the cottage .the pigs were flabbergasted to see their mother in the backseat.
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“I’ve come to the rescue,”announced Serafina.
“How did you know we needed you ?”cried the pigs
Serafina explained that the paper airplane with  Percy’s  message had fluttered cleat to the Gulf of Pasta ,where it landed in her salad.
“Now let’s deal with that wolf !”she cried .
Without further delay, the waffle iron was positioned in the fireplace.
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Meanwhile ,the wolf launched himself down the chimney, screeching ,”here I come ,piggies! you’ll soon be sausages!”
“no, we won’t ,wolfie,” Serafina cried as the wolf slammed into the red-hot griddle.” you’ll soon be a WOLFFLE!”
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THE SIZZLING WOLF STAGGERED FROM THE WAFFLE IRON.BUT BEFORE HE COULD CATCH HIS BREATH,THE PIGS HOSED HIM TO THE FLOOR WITH A BLAST OF MAPLE SYRUP. THEN THEY SMOTHERED HIM IN BUTTER ,fogged him from head to toe with powdered sugar, and finished him off with a final squirt of syrup.
“I surrender!”he gasped.
Although the emergency was over, Serafina admitted that she was not eager to return to retirement .The news brought cheers from her family. They laded Tempesto  into the taxi and sent him to the Gulf of Pasta in her place.
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Soon afterward,Percy,Pete, and  Prudence married their childhood sweethearts.
And it wasn’t long before serafina found herself surrounded by dozens of grandchildren.
The new family members expanded the business, and soon there were waffleries around the world.
“my dream has come true ,”sighed serafina.

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As for Tempesto, the waffle iron had steamed the meanness out of him. He gave up crime and spent the rest of his life as a mellow beach bum lolling about on the Gulf of Pasta.

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#2 囡囡妈 2010-03-28

KELLOGG的书很有趣哈,这本我和囡以前读过。。有空我帮你翻吧。

#3 囡囡妈 2010-03-29

马上行动,这本书我手上没有,可不可以麻烦你再校对一下你打的英文部分,免得有误。谢谢。

#4 马上行动 2010-03-29

囡囡妈:文章已经核对过两次了。期待你的翻译故事!

#5 囡囡妈 2010-03-30

《三只小猪》

1,

猪妈妈萨拉芬娜要养活三只小猪娃——帕西、派特和普鲁邓斯,生活十分艰辛。直到有一天晚上,萨拉芬娜做了一个很奇特的梦。她下定决心:“我要把华夫饼带到这个世界上来!”

2,
萨拉芬娜用螺丝把一个旧的华夫饼模子安到轮子上,又安装了一些槽箱、铁管和软管。

然后她在机器里倒入华夫饼面糊、枫糖浆、黄油,还有白糖。

3,

每天早上天一亮,一家人就推着萨拉芬娜发明的小车出门了,让过路的人们可以高兴地吃到他们做的美味华夫饼。

4,

很快,萨拉芬娜就有钱让孩子们进入猪好好学院上学了。几年过去了,三个孩子在课堂上、篮球场上、以及学校其它活动中的表现都让萨拉芬娜十分骄傲。

5,

最终,孩子们都毕业了,萨拉芬娜就把华夫饼生意交给了他们。
“我要去帕斯塔海湾养老了,”她向孩子们宣布:“如果你们需要我的帮助,就给那里打电话。”

 6,
三只小猪经营着华夫饼生意,并在附近建造了各自的新屋。帕西编稻草建了一个舒服的小草屋。

7,

派特建了一个小木屋,普鲁邓斯则建了一个砖房子。华夫饼的生意一直很好,生活就这么快乐地哼唱而过。

8,
日子一直这样快乐,直到有一天,一个名叫特姆皮斯特的大狼出现了。
“好呀,小火腿;好呀,小熏肉;好呀,小香肠,”他恶狠狠地说:“你们把自己抹上黄油,快跳到烤盘里去吧,我要把你们当早餐。”
“我们只卖华夫饼,”皮特小心翼翼地回答:“您想吃什么味道的?”

“我恨华夫饼!”大狼厉声说道:“我想吃的是你!”

9,

特姆皮斯特俯身向前,他太想一把就抓到小猪们了,结果一下子把华夫饼车弄翻了。帕西、派特和普鲁邓斯赶紧都跑回了家。

10,

过了一会儿,特姆皮斯特敲着帕西的小草屋的门,高声叫嚷:“打开门,小猪排!否则我就使劲儿吹呀吹,扫平你这破屋!”

帕西急急忙忙地在一个纸飞机上写了一封求救信,并把它对着警长办公室的方向扔了出去。

11,

突然,一阵像台风似的强风吹过,把小草屋吹毁了,帕西家里的东西散落得到处都是。

12,

帕西的纸飞机引起了绵羊警长的注意。

不过就在他要抓到纸飞机的时候,帕西的浴缸就像一块大陨石一样落了下来。

13,

与此同时,帕西抢在大狼之前赶到了派特的家。特姆皮斯特咆哮着:“让我进去,否则我要把这堆木头毁掉!”
“不!不!不!用我们下巴上的毛起誓,决不让你进!”帕西和派特一起喊道。

14,

好象十七个链锯那么大的力量,大狼一口气就把小木屋变成了一地锯屑。

15,

兄弟俩直接就被吹向了普鲁邓斯的砖房,普鲁邓斯赶紧把他们迎进了门。

 16,
过了一会儿,大狼就来敲门了。
“投降吧,你们这些胆小的猪!”他吼叫着:“否则我就使劲儿吹呀吹,把这个猪圈变成碎石块!”
“开炮!”小猪们高叫。西瓜、南瓜、哈蜜瓜、葡萄,还有各式各样的点心,像炮弹一样,一股脑儿地砸到了特姆皮斯特的身上,让他摔了个大跟头。

17,

大狼跳了起来,气得暴跳如雷。
“这意味着战争!”他嚎叫着:“你死我活!”

18,

接下来的一天一夜,特姆皮斯特使出了浑身解术攻击着小猪的砖房。

19,

但是,第二天早上,借着黎明的晨曦,气急败坏的大狼发现砖墙依然完好地矗立着。
“该是改变战术的时候了。”他吼道。

特姆皮斯特抓起一个垃圾袋,开始使劲地吹呀吹。

20,
垃圾袋就像热气球一样鼓了起来,飘向了空中。
“摆好餐桌!小猪们!”特姆皮斯特高兴地叫起来。
“早餐就要上桌啦!”

21,

就在这时候,一辆出租车停在了小屋的门外,小猪们惊奇地发现他们的妈妈正坐在车后座上。

22,

“我来救你们了。”萨拉芬娜说。

“你怎么知道我们需要你?”小猪们问。
萨拉芬娜告诉他们,原来写着帕西的求救信的纸飞机飞到了帕斯塔海湾,正好落在了她的蔬菜沙拉上。

23,

“现在,让我们一起来对付这头大狼!”她大声地说。
毫不迟疑地,他们把华夫饼模子放进了壁炉里。

24,

这时候,大狼降落在了烟囱上,声嘶力竭地喊道:“我来啦,小猪们!你们马上就要变成香肠啦!”

25,

“不,我们不会,小狼仔,”萨拉芬娜正说着,大狼掉进了烧得正红的烤盘上。“你马上就会变成狼夫饼!”

26,

被烤得咝咝作响的大狼摇摇晃晃地爬出华夫饼模子,可还没等他喘过气来呢,小猪们又用皮管往它身上倒上了拌着枫糖浆的面粉,抹上了黄油,还从头到脚撒上了白糖,最后,又挤上了一大管的糖浆。
“我投降啦!”大狼喘着气。

27,

危险过去了,可萨拉芬娜并不想马上重回退休生活,这消息可让全家人都高兴坏了。他们把特姆皮斯特塞进了出租车,改送他去了帕斯特海湾。

 28,
不久,帕西、派特和普鲁邓斯都和青梅竹马的心上人结了婚。

再没过多久,萨拉芬娜就被几十个孙子孙女包围了。

29,

新的家庭成员把生意越做越大,很快,他们的华夫饼生意就响誉全球了。

萨拉芬娜满意地舒了口气:“我的梦成真了!”

30,
至于特姆皮斯特,华夫饼模子把他的坏心眼烤没了。他不再做坏事了,后半生都在帕斯塔海湾过着无所事事的流浪汉的日子。

#6 囡囡妈 2010-03-30

哦,对了,忘了说了,作者是STEVEN KELLOGG,国内已经出版了他的一些书,他的作品的特点,是具有奇特的想象力,画面色彩丰富。

我的翻译比较仓促,仅做参考。

#7 马上行动 2010-03-30

翻译的非常幽默风趣,非常喜欢这个故事。

昨天拍图没有把文字拍进去,今天一定好好拍,不枉费你的厚爱,hoho^^

#8 囡囡妈 2010-03-31

我把马上行动拍的照片做成了PPT,供大家参考阅读。

#9 小敏娃 2010-04-01

之前有看过另外一个版本的,可是这个还是better!表情占位:s:135

#10 囡囡妈 2010-04-02

马上行动又给大家拍了一下分页的图片,我做了PPT,放这里吧。

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#11 大手拉小手 2010-04-05

这个版本的写得真是太好玩了,三只小猪真是百看不厌

#12 呦呦堂 2010-04-23

这版的太可爱了,太好玩了

#13 龙腾知海阔 2010-04-23

哈哈,这个版本很好玩呀!