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(第二篇)My Pets之老猫的会议厅

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楼主:鼠鼠蓝 2010-04-21

IN GRIMALKIN HALL
One July night the Big Cat went
To warn the cats and kittens all,
At six o’clock that very night
To gather in Grimalkin Hall.
Now listen, Babies, why it was
The cats and kittens,one and all,
Were called upon to go in haste
And gather in Grimalkin Hall.
“We will no longer plaything be!”
The old cats cried with mew and squall.
“Cast shall no more be pulled and squeezed!
Down with babies, say we all!
They hurt and choke us with their hugs.
And pull our fur and let us fall:
Here after any cat may scratch!”
Was voted in Grimalkin Hall.

在老猫的会议厅

一个七月的晚上,晚上六点,
老猫的会议厅有大事件,
大猫咪警告小猫咪们,
听好了,宝贝儿,
为什么你们无论大小,一个个都被叫过来?
老猫们一起喵喵尖叫,
“因为我们不要当玩物了!”
“我们再也不要被揉来挤去,
从小宝宝开始,我们能做到!
他们的拥抱使我们窒息,
他们拽皮毛,让我们跌倒,
这里的猫咪都有被抓的痕迹。”
就是为了这个,我们坚决要投票。

#2 鼠鼠蓝 2010-04-21

不得不说,这个比《当鼠爷爷还年轻的时候》难度大,我是来学习的,请大家帮我一起修正下。。

#3 慕容胖胖 2010-04-21

我觉得诗歌翻译最好玩的一个部分就是找押韵的字眼。

可得琢磨呢,有时候突然想到一个可以用的字,心情无比爽朗啊。

你试试?原文是隔行押韵的。

#4 慕容胖胖 2010-04-25

想了一天也想不到全部的韵脚,只能先来一个不押韵的了。

IN GRIMALKIN HALL
在猫长老的议政厅里

One July night the Big Cat went

七月的一个晚上,猫老大发了通知
To warn the cats and kittens all,
无论男女老少,全体猫民

At six o’clock that very night
务必于六点,就是今夜

To gather in Grimalkin Hall.
集合在猫长老的议政厅里

Now listen, Babies, why it was
现在,孩儿们,听仔细

The cats and kittens,one and all,
到底为啥,把你们一个不落
 
Were called upon to go in haste
十万火急的

And gather in Grimalkin Hall.
召集到猫长老的议政厅里

“We will no longer plaything be!”
“我们再也不当玩物了!”

The old cats cried with mew and squall.
猫长老们高叫起来,瞄瞄哇哇声一片

“Cats shall no more be pulled and squeezed!
“猫儿们再也不该被拉拉扯扯,挤来挤去了!”
 
Down with babies, say we all!
让我们齐声高呼:打倒人类的小屁孩!

They hurt and choke us with their hugs.
他们胡搂乱抱,弄疼我们,害我们喘不上气
 
And pull our fur and let us fall:
拉扯我们的皮毛,把我们往地上扔

Here after any cat may scratch!”
从此以后,猫儿们都有权又抓又挠!

Was voted in Grimalkin Hall.

猫长老的议政厅里全票通过。

#5 鼠鼠蓝 2010-04-26

恩,学习了,我连最基本的意思都米有搞明白,惭愧啊~~

#6 慕容胖胖 2010-04-26

加油啦~你找的题材挺好玩的,多找几个来嘛。