Greenaway 的《金盏花园》英文小诗一簇，大家一起玩哦！

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Daisy

You very fine Miss Molly,
What will the daisies say,
If you carry home so many
Of their little friends to-day?
 Perhaps you take a sister,
Perhaps you take a brother,
Or two little daisies who
Were fond of one another.

雏菊

你个小茉莉，
采了一堆雏菊花，
雏菊们该会怎么说？
也许你该想一想，
带回雏菊哥哥和妹妹，
好让雏菊一家人，
亲亲热热在一起。

同意流云之鹰对第一首的意见，太文了
第二首更口语化一点，但似乎没有韵律，读不出朗朗上口的感觉

谢谢大家的意见，很有道理！

来吧来吧，都来玩，让更多的小火花四射！

小蓝

嘿,小蓝,
有空儿吗?
一起出去玩儿?

去哪儿玩儿呢?
哈,我有了
去草坪
那里开着樱草花

小蓝

小蓝,小蓝
有空儿吗?
一起去遛弯儿?

去哪里?
去草地
西洋樱草开满地

SUSAN BLUE.
Oh, Susan Blue,
How do you do?
Please may I go for a walk with you?
Where shall we go?
Oh, I know—
Down in the meadow where the cowslips grow!

小苏珊，
你好吗？
让我陪你散散步。
去哪里？
我带路——
开满报春花的大草地。

Daisy

You very fine Miss Molly,
What will the daisies say,
If you carry home so many
Of their little friends to-day?
Perhaps you take a sister,
Perhaps you take a brother,
Or two little daisies who
Were fond of one another.

雏菊

小茉莉，想一想，
带了这么多
雏菊的朋友们回家，
他们会怎么说？
也许你摘了雏菊妹妹，
也许是雏菊弟弟，
还可能是那
相亲相爱的两小朵。

这首不太好翻。。表情占位：s:138

后修改一份：

雏菊

小茉莉，好孩子，
想想雏菊会说啥？
你带了这么多
她的朋友回家去。
也许有她的小妹妹，
也许有她的小弟弟，
还可能带走了那
相亲相爱的小两朵儿。

SUSAN BLUE.
Oh, Susan Blue,
How do you do?
Please may I go for a walk with you?
Where shall we go?
Oh, I know—
Down in the meadow where the cowslips grow!
苏珊儿，
你可好？
一起散个步？
去哪里？
想到了——
报春花开的草地。

Daisy

You very fine Miss Molly,
What will the daisies say,
If you carry home so many
Of their little friends to-day?
Perhaps you take a sister,
Perhaps you take a brother,
Or two little daisies who
Were fond of one another.

茉莉好乖乖，
这许多雏菊往家带，
他们的朋友，
要怎么把你怪？
兴许带走了小弟，
兴许带走了小妹，
还有可能是
相亲相爱的一对。

表情占位：s:133 我突然发现，第二首我没看仔细，翻错了……

SUSAN BLUE.

Oh, Susan Blue,
How do you do?
Please may I go for a walk with you?
Where shall we go?
Oh, I know—
Down in the meadow where the cowslips grow!

嘿,小蓝蓝
你好吗?
能否允许我陪你散会步?
恩,我们去哪儿好?
啊哈!我知道个好地方
开满报春花的大草地^0^

大白文表情占位：s:123

我也觉得楼上韵律很好，还很大气呢表情占位：s:134