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【同题翻译】嘁哩喀嚓和噼里啪啦与比利羊

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楼主:大手拉小手 2010-12-31

http://www.childrensbooksonline.org/Snip_and_Snap_and_the_Billy_Goat/index.htm
有两只小花狗,一只名叫嘁哩喀嚓,另一只名叫噼里啪啦。它们是一对亲密的双胞胎弟兄,整日里形影不离,你只要看见这个,就保准能见着那个。它俩身上都长着一块黑黑的斑点,只不过,一只狗是黑耳朵,而另一只狗是黑眼圈。要不是有这点区别,当它俩跑过你身边时,你真是分不清谁是嘁哩喀嚓,谁是噼里啪啦。
有时候,它俩整天都在草地上顽皮嬉闹,经常像别的小狗一样,把那些根本不认识的猫都撵上树。
这天,天气晴朗,阳光明媚,主人说:“嘁哩喀嚓,噼里啪啦,我们要出门了,你们两个乖乖地待在这里看家。”
说完,主人朝它们挥挥手,好像在说:“再见!”
嘁哩喀嚓和噼里啪啦就趴下来,擦亮眼睛、竖起耳朵,看起了家。
过一会儿,嘁哩喀嚓对噼里啪啦说:“真是无聊啊!我敢肯定,你也和我一样觉得没意思,你看这样吧,不如我们到田野里跑一圈,然后就回家。”
于是它俩就跑到田野上疯玩,直到遇到了老比利羊,比利长着长长的山羊胡和一身长毛。它正站在水边,啃着河岸上的青草,还时不时下到又陡又滑的河岸边去喝水。
“喔吼!”嘁哩喀嚓喊道,“这下可真有好玩的了。咱们藏在小土坡后面,然后再一下子跳出来,吓死这个老比利。比利肯定大吃一惊,撒腿就跑,再掉到河里好好洗个澡,痛痛快快洗上几天几夜。”
但是,比利羊可不傻,它要多机灵有多机灵。就这两条小狗,他早看见了,哪个也没逃过他的眼睛。它晃着山羊胡,嗯,一看就很有学问。
比利羊往水边挪步,眼瞅着到河沿了,只听见两只小狗叫喊着窜出来,比利羊就往旁边闪了一步,把两只小狗一块儿都闪过去了。
哦!我的天啊!哦!我的地啊!这两只顽皮、鲁莽的小狗,跑得太快了,压根儿停不下来,它俩越过岸边,扑通一声掉水里去了!
掉进了这个大洗澡池子里,小狗们连哭带嚎,比利羊站在岸边假装没看见。
“喔吼!”比利羊喊道,“我可爱的一对,你俩可真算是一景啊!正好掉进了你们给我设计的陷阱里。”
两只小狗使出吃奶的劲儿想要抓挠到岸上,老比利站在岸边,把它们又顶回了河里。
终于,老比利肯让狗儿们上岸晾一晾了。
两条狗又湿又冷,还沾了一身烂泥,哆哆嗦嗦着呜呜哀号。
它俩朝着家走去,每人一幅可怜巴巴的苦相,浑身脏兮兮、湿漉漉,要多冷有多冷。
老比利羊看着两条落水狗灰溜溜地走远了。“嗯,”它摇着山羊胡子说道,“今天那些小狗们应该明白点什么了。”

#2 大手拉小手 2011-01-01

没有改,直接翻的文字,但是没找到作者生平,看书倒是很早前的了,不说只发文字稿不算侵权表情占位:s:138

#3 大手拉小手 2011-01-01

表情占位:s:133韵文好难翻,这两只小羊的名字我就想了好长时间,有空来补上韵文版

#4 慕容胖胖 2011-01-04

为了方便有兴趣的同学看原文和翻译,把原文打在下面。

Two little dogs were Snip and Snap
Twin brothers, as you see.
And close wherever you saw one
The other one would be.

One had a black spot on his ear,
And one upon his eye,
And that's how you knew Snip from Snap
Whenever they ran by.

They romped together on the lawn
Sometimes the whole day through,
And chased strange cats all up the trees,
As dogs are apt to do.

"Now, Snip and Snap" their master said
One fine and sunny day,
"You two must stay and watch the house
While we are all away."

And then he waved his hand at them 
As if to say "Good Bye,"
And Snip and Snap lay down on guard
With bright and watchful eye.

Said Snip to Snap:" 'Tis very dull,
I think you will agree;
Let's take a run across the fields
And right back home, you see."

And so across the fields they went
Without one thought of care
Until they met old Billy Goat
With great long beard and hair.

Right by the swimming hole he stood
And grazed upon the brink,
For down the steep and slippery bank
He often went to drink.

"Oh-ho!" cried Snip, "here's fun indeed;
We'll hide behind the hill,
And then come tearing down like mad 
And frighten Brother Bill.

And Bill, so startled and surprised,
Will jump to get away,
And get the finest bath he's had
For many and many a day."

Now Billy Goat was very wise
And shrewd as he could be;
He saw both dogs and wagged his beard
Oh, very knowingly.

He stepped out to the very brink,
And when, with bark and cry,
The two dogs came he stepped asid
And let them both go by.

Oh me! Oh my! They could not stop,
So fast they came, those rash
And naughty dogs, and o'er the brink
They went and then--ker-splash!

Into the swimming hole they went
With gurgle, yelp and cry,
And Billy Goat stood on the brink
And looked and winked his eye.

"Oh-ho!"he cried, "my pretty pair,
You are a sight to see;
You fell into the very trap
You tried to set for me."

And when they tried to scramble out
With all their might and main,
Old Billy stood upon the bank
And pushed them in again.

At last he let them both come out
Upon the bank to dry,
So wet and muddy and so cold,
With shiver, whine and cry.

And when they got back home they were
A sorry sight to see,
All streaked with mud and soaking wet 
And cold as they could be.

Old Billy Goat just wagged his beard
And saw them slink away;
"I think," he said, "those dogs have learned
A thing or two today."

#5 慕容胖胖 2011-01-04

“今天那些小狗们应该明白点什么了。”

最后那句读着有些硬翻的感觉,说“该懂点儿事儿了”感觉更习惯些。

各位觉着呢?

#6 正在看牡丹 2011-01-04

是的,“懂点儿事儿”感觉更加自然

#7 慕容胖胖 2011-01-04

小狗噼哩和小狗啪啦
是对儿双胞胎
你跟着我,我跟着你
从来不分开

一只的耳朵是黑一片
另一只眼上有片黑
等下次噼里啪啦跑过来
你就知道谁是谁

他们在草地上打打闹闹
有时能玩一整天
还有把新来的猫咪都赶到树上
小狗们常这么干

在一个阳光明媚的日子里,“噼哩、啪啦,听好了”
他们的主人吩咐
“你们可要乖乖待这儿把家看好,
因为我们都要出去”

----费老鼻子劲儿了----表情占位:s:137

#8 囡囡妈 2011-01-06

我也来参与一下。。。胖儿,大手,你们看看,我这样的风格,能行吗?时间不够,没弄完,有空再说。。

两只小狗,兄弟俩儿,
一只叫顽皮,一只叫淘气,
一只走到哪儿,一只跟到哪儿,
他俩儿总是形影也不离。

耳朵上有块黑的是顽皮,
眼睛上有块黑的是淘气,
要分清他俩儿,这点要牢记,
不然你准把顽皮当淘气。

两只小狗过得无忧又无虑,
整天在草地上玩耍乐不停,
还追着猫仔一溜烟爬上树,
小狗拿手的事,他俩儿都特灵。

一天天气好,主人一家要出门,
走前忙着来交代:“顽皮和淘气,
我们不在家,你俩儿要听话,
把门来看好,乖乖呆在这里。”

然后主人冲他俩儿摆摆手,
好像在说“我走啦,再见。”
顽皮和淘气眨着警觉的大眼睛,
躺在大门口,准备好好把家看。

#9 慕容胖胖 2011-01-06

囡妈这个风格当然是好的。

原文里有分谁是谁么?

#10 大手拉小手 2011-01-18

真是头大,我先跟到这里吧,翻完估计要年后有时间的了,又看了下原文,还有配音,读得很慢很清晰,可以练习听英语,是不是每句结尾押韵?

小狗噼里和啪啦 是形影不离的小哥俩  要是你遇见小噼里 一准儿也少不了小啪啦
有一天的天气真正好 狗儿的主人来吩咐:“嗨,噼里和啪啦,我们要离家出趟门,你们俩把家来看好。”
主人挥手道了别 再看噼里和啪啦 竖起耳朵瞪大眼 认认真真来看家
不一会儿噼里就问啪啦:“有点无聊,你说是吧?不如去田野跑一圈,马上我们就回家。”
直到它们遇见了比利羊 老羊的眉毛胡子一大把

比利站在水潭边 细嚼慢咽吃着草 还下到潭里去喝水 虽然它脚下湿又滑
“哇!哦!”噼里喊:“有玩的喽!我们藏在土坡后 疯跑出来吓唬它!
吓傻的比利会跳着逃 下去痛痛快快洗个澡