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楼主:晓晞 2011-01-31


                                       做了一个好梦,
                                       走进梦乡,
                                       看见花开,
                                       一朵花开,
                                       一朵小花,
                                       平凡无奇,
                                       梦想自己是花仙子,
                                       无忧无虑的酿蜜······

#2 圆月饼 2011-02-01

晓晞这首更像童诗
儿歌还是要韵律感强一些