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楼主:猪爸爸 2011-05-04

试译了一点THE COUNTERPANE FAIRY,以后有时间慢慢继续完成。谢谢大家多多指教!

The Counterpane Fairy
床罩仙女

by Katharine Pyle

CHAPTER FIRST  THE PRINCESS OF THE GOLDEN CASTLE
第一章 金色城堡里的公主

TEDDY was all alone, for his mother had been up with him so much the
night before that at about four o'clock in the afternoon she said that
she was going to lie down for a little while.
妈妈昨天一夜没睡陪了他一个晚上,下午四点钟的时候,妈妈说要去床上睡一会
儿。现在只剩下泰迪孤单单一个人了。

The room where Teddy lay was very pleasant, with two big windows, and
the furniture covered with gay old-fashioned India calico. His mother
had set a glass of milk on the table beside his bed, and left the stair
door ajar so that he could call Hannah, the cook, if he wanted anything,
and then she had gone over to her own room.
泰迪睡的房间有两扇大窗子,家具上盖着老式的印度灰棉布,看上去很舒适。妈妈
回自己房间之前,在泰迪床头桌上放了一杯牛奶,把楼梯门留了一条缝,这样他
如果需要什么就可以叫得到厨师汉娜。

The little boy had always enjoyed being ill, for then he was read aloud
to and had lemonade, but this had been a real illness, and though he was
better now, the doctor still would not let him have anything but milk
and gruel. He was feeling rather lonely, too, though the fire crackled
cheerfully, and he could hear Hannah singing to herself in the kitchen
below.
生病了就有人给大声念书,还可以喝到柠檬汽水,所以这小男孩一直喜欢生病。
可这一次他是真的病了,现在虽然好些了,但医生依然不允许他吃其他东西,只让他喝牛奶和
稀粥。炉火噼里啪啦响着,显得很快乐,楼下厨房里汉娜自娱自乐地唱着歌,他也
能听得见。不过他还是觉得十分孤独。

Teddy turned over the leaves of Robinson Crusoe for a while, looking at
the gaily colored pictures, and then he closed it and called, "Hannah!"
The singing in the kitchen below ceased, and Teddy knew that Hannah was
listening. "Hannah!" he called again.
泰迪翻了一会儿《鲁滨孙漂流记》,看看那些颜色鲜艳的插图,又把书合起来,叫
了一声:“汉娜!”楼下厨房里歌声戛然而止,泰迪知道汉娜竖起耳朵听着呢,所以又叫了
一声:“汉娜!”

At the second call Hannah came hurrying up the stairs and into the room.
"What do you want, Teddy?" she asked.
喊声刚停,汉娜就急急忙忙跑上楼梯,冲进房间,问:“泰迪,你想要什么?”

"Hannah, I want to ask mamma something," said Teddy.
泰迪说:“汉娜,我有点事想问问妈妈。”

"Oh," said Hannah, "you wouldn't want me to call your poor mother, would
you, when she was up with you the whole of last night and has just gone
to lie down a bit?"
汉娜说:“噢,你可怜的妈妈陪了你一个晚上也没睡觉,刚躺下来想眯一会儿,你真要
我把她叫醒吗?”

"I want to ask her something," repeated Teddy.
泰迪又说:“我有点事想问问她。”

"You ask me what you want to know," suggested Hannah. "Your poor
mother's so tired that I'm sure you are too much of a man to want me to
call her."
“有什么事你就我问好嘞,”汉娜建议道。“你也这么大了,应该知道你妈妈太累了,真可怜,
不要让我再去叫她了。”

"Well, I want to ask her if I may have a cracker," said Teddy.
泰迪说:“好吧,我想问问我能吃一块饼干吗?”

"Oh, no; you couldn't have that," said Hannah. "Don't you know that the
doctor said you mustn't have anything but milk and gruel? Did you want
to ask her anything else?"
“哦,不行;不能吃,”汉娜说。“医生说你只能喝牛奶和稀粥,你不是不知道吧?
你还有什么要问妈妈吗?”

"No," said Teddy, and his lip trembled.
“没有了,”泰迪说着,嘴唇有点颤抖。

After that Hannah went down-stairs to her work again, and Teddy lay
staring out of the window at the windy gray clouds that were sweeping
across the April sky. He grew lonelier and lonelier and a lump rose in
his throat; presently a big tear trickled down his cheek and dripped off
his chin.
汉娜又下楼干活去了,泰迪躺在床上,盯着窗外。现在是四月,一朵朵白云被风
吹送着,飘过天空。泰迪觉得越来越孤独,喉咙里像塞进了什么东西。一会儿,
一颗泪珠滑过脸颊,从下巴滚落下来。

"Oh dear, oh dear!" said a little voice just back of the hill his knees
made as he lay with them drawn up in bed; "what a hill to climb!"
泰迪躺着时把腿收在床上,膝盖就成了一座小山。“哎呀,天哪,哎呀,天哪!”
就在小山后面响起了一个细小的声音,“这座山真难爬呀!”

Teddy stopped crying and gazed wonderingly toward where the voice came
from, and presently over the top of his knees appeared a brown peaked
hood, a tiny withered face, a flapping brown cloak, and last of all two
small feet in buckled shoes. It was a little old woman, so weazened and
brown that she looked more like a dried leaf than anything else.
泰迪止住哭声,惊奇地盯着声音发出的地方。不一会儿,从膝盖上先是出现了一块
尖顶棕色头巾,然后是干枯的小脸和飘动的棕色披风,最后露出来了两只小脚,
鞋子上扣着扣子。原来是一个矮小的老太婆,身体干瘪,脸色发黄,简直就像一片
枯叶。

She seated herself on Teddy's knees and gazed down at him solemnly, and
she was so light that he felt her weight no more than if she had been a
feather.
她坐在泰迪的膝盖上,很严肃地朝下看着泰迪。她很轻,泰迪觉得羽毛也会比她更重。

Teddy lay staring at her for a while, and then he asked, "Who are you?"
泰迪躺在那儿盯着她看了一会儿,然后问:“你是谁?”

"I'm the Counterpane Fairy," said the little figure, in a thin little
voice.
“我是床罩仙女,”小人用又尖又小的声音说。

"I don't know what that is," said Teddy.
“床罩仙女是什么呀?”泰迪说。

"Well," said the Counterpane Fairy, "it's the sort of a fairy that lives
in houses and watches out for the children. I used to be one of the
court fairies, but I grew tired of that. There was nothing in it, you
know."
“喔,”床罩仙女说,“那是一种住在房子里看护小孩的仙女。我曾经是庭院仙女,
后来我厌烦了。你也知道,那里什么东西也没有。”

"Nothing in what?" asked Teddy.
“是哪里没有东西啊?”泰迪问。

"Nothing in the court life. All day the fairies were swinging in
spider-webs and sipping honey-dew, or playing games of hide-and-go-seek.
The only comfort I had was with an old field-mouse who lived at the edge
of the wood, and I used to spend a great deal of time with her; I used
to take care of her babies when she was out hunting for something to
eat; cunning little things they were,--five of them, all fat and soft,
and with such funny little tails."
“住在庭院里呀。仙女们整天不是在蜘蛛网上荡秋千,就是去吸蜜汁,要不就捉迷藏。
我唯一觉得开心的就是和住在树林旁边的一只老田鼠在一起。我和她一起玩过很多
时间,她出去找食的时候我还帮她带过孩子。蛮可爱的一些小东西,——一共有五只,
都长得胖胖的,身体软软的,小尾巴也很好玩嘞。”

"What became of them?"
“他们后来怎么样了?”

"Oh, they moved away. They left before I did. As soon as they were old
enough, Mother Field-mouse went. She said she couldn't stand the court
fairies. They were always playing tricks on her, stopping up the door of
her house with sticks and acorns, and making faces at her babies until
they almost drove them into fits. So after that I left too."
“噢,搬走了。我走之前他们就走了。小田鼠一长大,田鼠妈妈就走了。她说她受不了
这些庭院仙女,她们老是捉弄她,用棒子和橡果塞住她家门,做鬼脸把孩子都快吓昏
过去了。他们离开后,我也走了。”

"Where did you go?"
“你到哪儿去了?”

"Oh, hither and yon. Mostly where there were little sick boys and
girls."
“噢,各个地方都去。通常是有生病的小男孩和小女孩的地方。”

"Do you like little boys?"
“你喜欢小男孩吗?”

"Yes, when they don't cry," said the Counterpane Fairy, staring at him
very hard.
“喜欢,不过他们一哭就不喜欢了,”床罩仙女盯着泰迪说。

"Well, I was lonely," said Teddy. "I wanted my mamma."
泰迪说:“哦,我有点孤单,我要妈妈。”

"Yes, I know, but you oughtn't to have cried. I came to you, though,
because you were lonely and sick, and I thought maybe you would like me
to show you a story."
“我知道,但你不应该哭啊。但是你很孤单,又生着病,所以我还是到这儿来了。
我给你展示个故事,你也许会喜欢的。”

"Do you mean tell me a story?" asked Teddy.
泰迪问:“你是说要给我讲个故事?”

"No," said the fairy, "I mean show you a story. It's a game I invented
after I joined the Counterpane Fairies. Choose any one of the squares of
the counterpane and I will show you how to play it. That's all you have
to do,--to choose a square."
床罩仙女说:“不是,我是要给你展示个故事。这是我加入床罩仙女后发明的游戏。
在床罩上选一个方块吧,我就让你看看怎么玩。你只需要选一个方块。”

Teddy looked the counterpane over carefully. "I think I'll choose that
yellow square," he said, "because it looks so nice and bright."
泰迪仔细地查看了一下床罩,说:“我选那块黄的,又好看又鲜艳。”

"Very well," said the Counterpane Fairy. "Look straight at it and don't
turn your eyes away until I count seven times seven and then you shall
see the story of it."
“很好,”床罩仙女说。“盯着那个方块,眼睛不要转开。我数到七七四十九下,
你就能看到里面的故事了。”

#2 猪爸爸 2011-05-10

Teddy fixed his eyes on the square and the fairy began to count.
"One--two--three--four," she counted; Teddy heard her voice, thin and
clear as the hissing of the logs on the hearth. "Don't look away from
the square," she cried. "Five--six--seven"--it seemed to Teddy that the
yellow silk square was turning to a mist before his eyes and wrapping
everything about him in a golden glow. "Thirteen--fourteen"--the fairy
counted on and on. "Forty-six--forty-seven--forty-eight--FORTY-NINE!"
泰迪目不转睛地盯着那个方块,仙女开始数起来:“一--二--三--四。”她的声音
细小但很清晰,很像壁炉里木头发出的嘶嘶声。泰迪在听着。她叫道:“看好那个方块,
五--六--七”--泰迪觉得眼前那个黄丝方块变成了一层薄雾,发出金光,把他周围的东西
通通包裹起来。“十三--十四”--仙女不停地数着。“四十六--四十七--四十八--四十九!”

At the words forty-nine, the Counterpane Fairy clapped her hands and
Teddy looked about him. He was no longer in a golden mist. He was
standing in a wonderful enchanted garden. The sky was like the golden
sky at sunset, and the grass was so thickly set with tiny yellow flowers
that it looked like a golden carpet. From this garden stretched a long
flight of glass steps. They reached up and up and up to a great golden
castle with shining domes and turrets.
数到四十九,床罩仙女拍拍手,泰迪看看左右。他已经不在那金色薄雾中,而到
了一个奇妙的魔法花园里。天空晚霞一般一片金黄色,草地上密布着小黄花,似乎
铺着金色的地毯。一段长长的玻璃台阶从花园里伸展出去。沿着台阶一直往上,
是一个宏伟的金色城堡。城堡的圆顶和塔楼闪闪发光。

"Listen!" said the Counterpane Fairy. "In that golden castle there lies
an enchanted princess. For more than a hundred years she has been lying
there waiting for the hero who is to come and rescue her, and you are
the hero who can do it if you will."
床罩仙女说:“听着,一个施了魔法的公主躺在这个城堡里。一百多年来一直躺着,
等英雄来救她。你要是愿意的话,你就是来救她的英雄。”

With that the fairy led him to a little pool close by, and bade him look
in the water. When Teddy looked, he saw himself standing there in the
golden garden, and he did not appear as he ever had before. He was tall
and strong and beautiful, like a hero.
仙女说着把泰迪带到不远的小池边,让他看着水里。泰迪一看,自己还是站在金色花园里,
但已经完全变了模样。现在的他高大,强壮,英俊,完全像一个英雄。

"Yes," said Teddy, "I will do it."
泰迪说:“好的,我去救公主。”

At these words, from the grass, the bushes, and the tress around,
suddenly started a flock of golden birds. They circled about him and
over him, clapping their wings and singing triumphantly. Their song
reminded Teddy of the blackbirds that sang on the lawn at home in the
early spring, when the daffodils were up. Then in a moment they were all
gone, and the garden was still again.
话音刚落,一群金色的小鸟突然从草地上、灌木丛中和树枝头飞起来。它们拍动着
翅膀,兴高采烈地唱着歌,围着泰迪飞来飞去,一会儿又在他头顶盘旋。听到小鸟的歌声,
泰迪想起了早春时节水仙花开放时,在他家草坪上唱歌的乌鸫。一眨眼,小鸟们
都飞走了,花园又安静下来。

Their song had filled his heart with a longing for great deeds, and,
without pausing longer, he ran to the glass steps and began to mount
them.
小鸟的歌声使泰迪心潮澎湃,决心要做一番大事。他毫不迟疑,大步跨上玻璃
台阶往上爬。

Up and up and up he went. Once he turned and waved his hand to the
Counterpane Fairy in the golden garden far below. She waved her hand in
answer, and he heard her voice faint and clear. "Good-bye! Good-bye! Be
brave and strong, and beware of that that is little and gray."
他越爬越高,爬的时候他转过一次身,向在下面金色花园里床罩仙女挥挥手。床罩仙女
已经离得很远的了。仙女声音虽然微弱,但泰迪能清晰地听到:“再见!再见!胆大点,
坚强点。小心灰色的小小的东西。”

Then Teddy turned his face toward the castle, and in a moment he was
standing before the great shining gates.
后来泰迪把脸转向城堡,一会儿就到了闪闪发光的巨大的城门口。

He raised his hand and struck bravely upon the door. There was no
answer. Again he struck upon it, and his blow rang through the hall
inside; then he opened the door and went in.
他举起手,勇敢地敲着门。没有回应。他又敲了一下,只有他的敲门声在里面大厅
回荡着。他把门打开,走了进去。

The hall was five-sided, and all of pure gold, as clear and shining as
glass. Upon three sides of it were three arched doors; one was of
emerald, one was of ruby, and one was of diamond; they were arched, and
tall, and wide,--fit for a hero to go through. The question was,
behind which one lay the enchanted princess.
大厅有五面,都是纯金制成,像玻璃一样清澈闪亮。其中三面装有拱形门,第一扇
是翡翠门,另外一扇是红宝石门,第三扇是钻石门。三扇门都呈拱形,很高,也很宽
--英雄就应该进这样的门。只是施了魔法的公主躺在哪扇门后面呢?

While Teddy stood there looking at them and wondering, he heard a little
thin voice, that seemed to be singing to itself, and this is what it
sang:
泰迪站在那里一边看着这些门,一边在想着。这时他听见一个细小的声音,
好像在自娱自乐唱着歌。是这样唱的:

"In and out and out and in,
  Quick as a flash I weave and spin.
  Some may mistake and some forget,
  But I'll have my spider-web finished yet."
“进进出出,匆匆忙忙,
快如闪电,编丝织网。
不怕出错,不怕遗漏,
织好蛛网,一丝不苟。”

When Teddy heard the song, he knew that someone must be awake in the
enchanted castle, so he began looking about him.
听到歌声,泰迪知道在施了魔法的城堡里有一个醒着的人。他朝四周看看。

On the fourth side of the wall there hung a curtain of silvery-gray
spider-web, and the voice seemed to come from it. The hero went toward
it, but he saw nothing, for the spider that was spinning it moved so
fast that no eyes could follow it. Presently it paused up in the
left-hand corner of the web, and then Teddy saw it. It looked very
little to have spun all that curtain of silvery web.
第四面墙上悬挂着一张银灰色的蛛网,声音好像就是从那里发出的。英雄走到
蛛网跟前,但什么也没看见。织网的蜘蛛动得太快了,眼睛根本跟不上。一会儿
后,它停在蛛网的左边角落上,泰迪这才看见它。这么小的东西,竟然织出了
这么大一张银色的网。

As Teddy stood looking at it, it began to sing again:
泰迪站着那里正看着,蜘蛛又唱了起来:

"Here in my shining web I sit,
  To look about and rest a bit.
  I rest myself a bit and then,
  Quick as a flash, I begin again."
“蛛网闪闪,端坐中央
  四周瞧瞧,真是舒畅。
  稍事休息,重整旗鼓,
  闪电一般,继续工作。”

"Mistress Spinner! Mistress Spinner!" cried Teddy. "Can you tell me
where to find the enchanted princess who lies asleep waiting for me to
come and rescue her?"
“织娘!织娘!”泰迪大声叫道。“有一个沉睡的施了魔法的公主,正等着我来救
她。你能告诉我哪儿能找到她吗?”

The spider sat quite still for a while, and then it said in a voice as
thin as a hair: "You must go through the emerald door; you must go
through the emerald door. What so fit as the emerald door for the hero
who would do great deeds?"
蜘蛛静静地坐着,过了一会儿才用细如发丝的声音说:“你得穿过那扇翡翠门,你得
穿过那扇翡翠门。要干大事的英雄当然得穿过翡翠门,还有比这更合适的门吗?”

Teddy did not so much as stay to thank the little gray spinner, he was
in such a hurry to find the princess, but turning he sprang to the
emerald door, flung it open, and stepped outside.
泰迪急着要去寻找公主,片刻也不耽搁,竟没有谢谢这个灰色的小小的织娘。他
转过身来,跳到翡翠门前,猛地推开门,跨了出去。

He found himself standing on the glass steps, and as his foot touched
the topmost one the whole flight closed up like an umbrella, and in a
moment Teddy was sliding down the smooth glass pane, faster and faster
and faster until he could hardly catch his breath.
他发现自己站在玻璃台阶上,脚刚一碰到最高一级,整个台阶就像一把伞一样收
了起来。转眼间,泰迪从光滑的玻璃面上往下滑,越滑越快,越滑越快,他几乎
喘不过气来。

The next thing he knew he was standing in the golden garden, and there
was the Counterpane Fairy beside him looking at him sadly. "You should
have known better than to try the emerald door," she said; "and now
shall we break the story?"
接下来他知道的就是,他站在了金色花园里,床罩仙女在一旁沮丧地看着他。她说:“你
怎么不动动脑筋,选了翡翠门呢?故事要不要就此打住?”

"Oh, no, no!" cried Teddy, and he was still the hero. "Let me try once
more, for it may be I can yet save the princess."
“噢,不要,不要!”泰迪叫道,他还是一个英雄。“让我再试一次吧,也许我最后
能把公主救出来。”

#3 囡囡妈 2011-05-18

猪爸爸,今天有空,我把你的翻译读了一下。。和你交流一下哈~~

我发现你很喜欢调换字词顺序,就好像开篇,你直接把“TEDDY was all alone”翻到后面去了。呵呵,嗯,我个人是觉得这样做,有些时候合适,有些时候就不合适。在开篇这里,个人以为就是很不合适。整段的主语后置了,这并不符合中文的阅读习惯。而且语境也不对了,上来应该就是主人公——TEDDY么,这样一目了然。

后面你还有多处类似的处理,嗯,我个人是觉得很多是可以避免的,像后面“Teddy heard her voice, thin and clear as the hissing of the logs on the hearth.”这句的翻译,“泰迪在听着。”这句,不但后置,而且给人感觉很多余。其实原句还是很好表达的啊。

嗯,说实话,我不太肯定你这种做法是出于什么原因,是个人语言习惯,还是翻译上感觉难以处理?

另,蜘蛛的两首小诗蛮有意思的。呵呵。。

#4 猪爸爸 2011-05-20

谢谢囡囡妈的指教,以后我会多注意这方面的问题。
关于为什么改变原文字词顺序,我是觉得中文比较习惯于按照时间先后来叙述,所以我就这样来处理了。正如您所讲的,这样做有时候合适,有时候并不合适,以后下笔时一定要多推敲推敲。

#5 慕容胖胖 2011-05-28

猪爸爸,谢谢你带给我们这么有趣的故事。我也注意到你喜欢调顺序的特点了,我觉得大多数我读起来还是很顺的哈。

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#6 猪爸爸 2011-05-31

谢谢大家的厚爱,只有加倍努力。今天把第一章完成了。

Then the Counterpane Fairy smiled. "Very well," she said, "you shall
try again; but remember what I told you, beware of that that is little
and gray, and take this with you, for it may be of use." Stooping, she
picked up a blade of grass from the ground and handed it to him.
床罩仙女笑了笑,说:“好吧,让你再试一次。记住我的话,当心那个小小的灰色的
东西。把这个带着,也许有用。”她弯下腰,从地上捡起一根像刀一样的草,递给泰迪。

The hero took it wondering, and in his hands it was changed to a sword
that shone so brightly that it dazzled his eyes. Then he turned, and
there was the long flight of glass steps leading up to the golden castle
just as before; so thrusting the magic sword into his belt, he ran
nimbly up and up and up, and not until he reached the very topmost step
did he turn and look back to wave farewell to the Counterpane Fairy
below. She waved her hand to him. "Remember," she called, "beware of
what is little and gray."
我们的英雄很纳闷地接过来,可一到他手里这根草就变成了一把闪亮耀眼的剑。
他转过身来,通往金色城堡的长长的玻璃台阶又像刚才那样出现了。泰迪把这柄魔剑
塞进腰带,灵巧地往上爬啊爬。到了最高一级台阶,他转过身来向下面的床罩仙女
招手告别。床罩仙女也挥挥手,叫道:“千万记住,当心那个小小的灰色的东西。"

He opened the door and went into the five-sided golden hall, and there
were the three doors just as before, and the spider spinning and singing
on the fourth side:
泰迪推开门,跨进五边形的金色大厅,原来的三扇门还在那里,在第四面墙上蜘蛛一边织网,
一边唱着:

"Now the brave hero is wiser indeed;
  He may have failed once, but he still may succeed.
  Dull are the emeralds; diamonds are bright;
  So is his wisdom that shines as the light."
“勇敢的英雄,长了一智,
  失败了一回,也不泄气。
  暗淡的翡翠,钻石闪亮,
  英雄的智慧,光芒万丈。”

"The diamond door!" cried Teddy. "Yes, that is the door that I should
have tried. How could I have thought the emerald door was it?" and
opening the diamond door he stepped through it.
“钻石门!”泰迪叫起来。“对,应该试一试钻石门。我怎么就选了翡翠门呢?”
他打开钻石门,走了进去。

He hardly had time to see that he was standing at the top of the glass
steps, before--br-r-r-r!--they had shut up again into a smooth glass
hill, and there he was spinning down them so fast that the wind whistled
past his ears.
还没等泰迪在玻璃台阶顶上有时间到处看看,突然--扑-突-突!--玻璃台阶又收了
起来,变成光滑的玻璃小山,泰迪从上面快速往下滚,风从耳边呼啸而过。

In less time than it takes to tell, he was back again for the third time
in the golden garden, with the Counterpane Fairy standing before him,
and he was ashamed to raise his eyes.
说时迟,那时快,泰迪第三次回到了金色花园,床罩仙女站在他面前,而泰迪非常羞愧,
不敢抬眼。

"So!" said the Counterpane Fairy. "Did you know no better than to open
the diamond door?"
床罩仙女说:“你看看!怎么不想想就去打开钻石门?”

"No," said Teddy, "I knew no better."
泰迪说:“我没多想想。”

"Then," said the fairy, "if you can pay no better heed to my warnings
than that, the princess must wait for another hero, for you are not the
one."
仙女说:“既然是这样,你把我的提醒当耳旁风,公主等的肯定是其他英雄,你不是
她要等的。”

"Let me try but once more," cried Teddy, "for this time I shall surely
find her."
泰迪叫道:“让我再试最后一次吧,这一次我一定会找到她。”

"Then you may try once more and for the last time," said the fairy, "but
beware of what is little and gray." Stooping she picked from the grass
beside her a fallen acorn cup and handed it to him. "Take this with
you," she said, "for it may serve you well."
“好吧,再给你试一次,但这是最后一次,”床罩仙女说,“要当心那个小小的灰色的
东西。”她弯腰从身边的草地上捡起一颗掉落的橡果壳,递给泰迪,说:“把这个带上,
可能很有用。”

As he took it from her, it was changed in his hand to a goblet of gold
set round with precious stones. He thrust it into his bosom, for he was
in haste, and turning he ran for the third time up the flight of glass
steps. This time so eager was he that he never once paused to look back,
but all the time he ran on up and up he was wondering what it was that
she meant about her warning. She had said, "Beware of what is little and
gray." What had he seen that was little and gray?
泰迪一接过橡果壳,它就变成一只镶满宝石的金杯。泰迪很心急,把金杯匆忙塞进怀中,
然后转过身来,第三次跑上玻璃台阶。这一次他有点迫不及待了,也没有停下来看看后面,
只是一直不停地往上爬,一边还在想着仙女的提醒是什么意思。床罩仙女说过:“要当心
那个小小的灰色的东西。”他看到过的什么东西是小小的灰色的呢?

As soon as he reached the great golden hall he walked over to the
curtain of spider-web. The spider was spinning so fast that it was
little more than a gray streak, but presently it stopped up in the
left-hand corner of the web. As the hero looked at it he saw that it was
little and gray. Then it began to sing to him in its little thin voice:
泰迪一爬到宏伟的金色大厅,就走到帘子似的蛛网前。蜘蛛织得太快了,所以它
看起来几乎变成了一条灰色的带子。不一会儿,蜘蛛在蛛网左手边角落停了下来。
英雄泰迪看着蜘蛛,看出来它就是小小的灰色的。接着蜘蛛开始对着泰迪用细小的声音
唱起来:

"Great hero, wiser than ever before,
  Try the red door, try the red door.
  Open the door that is ruby, and then
  You never need search for the princess again."
“大英雄啊,又长了一智,
  那红色的门,快去试试。
  只要打开红宝石的门,
  再也不用为了公主,东跑西奔。”

"No, I will not open the ruby door," cried Teddy. "Twice have you sent
me back to the golden garden, and now you shall fool me no more."
“不,我不会去开红宝石门的,”泰迪叫道。“你把我送回到金色花园两次了,我
再也不上你的当了。”

As he said this he saw that one corner of the spider-web curtain was
still unfinished, in spite of the spider's haste, and underneath was
something that looked like a little yellow door. Then suddenly he knew
that that was the door he must go through. He caught hold of the curtain
and pulled, but it was as strong as steel. Quick as a flash he snatched
from his belt the magic sword, and with one blow the curtain was cut in
two, and fell at his feet.
他说话的时候,发现虽然蜘蛛织得很快,但蛛网帘子的一个角落还没有完成,在那下面有一个像
黄色的小门的东西。泰迪突然意识到这就是他要穿过的门。他抓住帘子用力拉,但帘子
却像铁丝一样结实。闪电一般,他从腰带中拔出魔剑,重重一下,把帘子劈成两半,
他也脚着地掉了下去。

He heard the little gray spider calling to him in its thin voice, but he
paid no heed, for he had opened the little yellow door and stooped his
head and entered.
泰迪听见灰色的小蜘蛛尖声叫他,他也没时间去理会,这时他已打开小黄门,
低下头走了进去。

Beyond was a great courtyard all of gold, and with a fountain leaping
and splashing back into a golden basin in the middle. Bet what he saw
first of all was the enchanted princess, who lay stretched out as if
asleep upon a couch all covered with cloth of gold. He knew she was a
princess, because she was so beautiful and because she wore a golden crown.
前面有一个金碧辉煌的大院子,喷泉喷着水,水花飞溅着落回中间的金盆。我敢担保
泰迪首先看到的就是施了魔法的公主。公主直直地躺在金布覆盖的躺椅上,像睡着了一样。
泰迪知道她一定是公主,因为她是那么美丽,头上还戴着金皇冠。

He stood looking at her without stirring, and at last he whispered:
"Princess! Princess! I have come to save you."
泰迪一动不动地站在那里看着她,最后低声说:“公主!公主!我来救你啦。”

Still she did not stir. He bent and touched her, but she lay there in
her enchanted sleep, and her eyes did not open. Then Teddy looked about
him, and seeing the fountain he drew the magic cup from his bosom and,
filling it, sprinkled the hands and face of the princess with the water.
公主还是没有动。泰迪弯下腰摸摸她,但她仍然躺在那里,在施了魔法的睡梦中,眼睛
也没有睁开。这时泰迪看看四周,他看见了喷泉,就从怀中掏出魔杯,装满水,然后
洒在公主的手上和脸上。

Then her eyes opened and she raised herself upon her elbow and smiled.
"Have you come at last?" she cried.
这时公主睁开眼,用手臂撑着坐起来,笑着说:“你终于来了?”

"Yes," answered Teddy, "I have come."
泰迪回答道:“是的,我来了。”

The princess looked about her. "But what became of the spider?" she
said. Then Teddy, too, looked about, and there was the spider running
across the floor toward where the princess lay.
公主看了看周围。她问:“蜘蛛怎么样啦?”泰迪也往四周看看,蜘蛛正从地板上朝
公主躺的地方跑过来。

Quickly he sprang from her side and set his foot upon it. There was a
thin squeak and then--there was nothing left of the little gray spinner
but a tiny gray smudge on the floor.
泰迪从公主身边猛地跳起来,用脚踩向蜘蛛。只听见细细的尖叫声,然后--小小的灰色的
织娘不见了,地板上只留下一块灰色的小斑。

Instantly the golden castle was shaken from top to bottom, and there was
a sound of many voices shouting outside. The princess rose to her feet
and caught the hero by the hand. "You have broken the enchantment," she
cried, "and now you shall be the King of the Golden Castle and reign
with me."
霎那间,整个金色城堡摇晃起来,外面有无数的声音叫喊着。公主站起来,抓住英雄的手。
“你已经打破了魔咒,”她说,“你现在就是金色城堡的国王,和我一起统治这个城堡。”

"Oh, but I can't," said Teddy, "because--because---"
泰迪说:“哦,可我不行。因为--因为--”

But the princess drew him out with her through the hall, and there they
were at the head of the flight of glass steps. A great host of soldiers
and courtiers were running up it. They were dressed in cloth of gold,
and they shouted at the sight of Teddy: "Hail to the hero! Hail to the
hero!" and Teddy knew them by their voices for the golden birds that had
fluttered around him in the garden below.
但公主却拉着他一起穿过大厅,来到玻璃台阶顶端。一大群士兵和大臣正朝上爬。他们
都身穿金衣,一看见泰迪就喊起来:“英雄万岁!英雄万岁!”泰迪从声音中听出来,他们
就是在下面花园里围着他飞来飞去的金色的鸟儿。

"And all this is yours," said the beautiful princess, turning toward him
with---
“所有这些都是你的了,”美丽的公主说着,转过身来,带着--

* * * * * * * *

"So that is the story of the yellow square," said the Counterpane Fairy.
“这就是黄色方块的故事,”床罩仙女说。

Teddy looked about him. The golden castle was gone, and the stairs, and
the shouting courtiers. He was lying in bed with the silk coverlet over
his little knees and Hannah was still singing in the kitchen below.
泰迪四周看看,金色城堡不见了,台阶和叫喊着的大臣也不见了。他还是躺在床上,
小膝盖上盖着丝织被单,汉娜还在下面厨房里唱着歌。

"Did you like it?" asked the fairy.
“你喜欢吗?”仙女问。

Teddy heaved a deep sigh. "Oh! Wasn't it beautiful?" he said. Then he
lay for a while thinking and smiling. "Wasn't the princess lovely?" he
whispered half to himself.
泰迪长长地叹了一口气,说:“噢!真漂亮啊!”他又躺了一会儿,想着想着,嘴角露出了
笑容。“公主真可爱啊!”他低声说着,一半对仙女说,一半是对自己说。

The Counterpane Fairy got up slowly and stiffly, and picked up the staff
that she had laid down beside her. "Well, I must be journeying on," she
said.
床罩仙女艰难地慢慢站起来,捡起放在身边的拐杖,说:“就这样吧,我要赶路了。”

"Oh, no, no!" cried Teddy. "Please don't go yet."
“噢,不,不!”泰迪叫道。“请不要走。”

"Yes, I must," said the Counterpane Fairy. "I hear your mother coming."
床罩仙女说:“不,我必须走。我听见你妈妈来了。”

"But will you come back again?" cried Teddy.
“你还会再回来吗?”泰迪哭道。

The Counterpane Fairy made no answer. She was walking down the other
side of the bedquilt hill, and Teddy heard her voice, little and thin,
dying away in the distance: "Oh dear, dear, dear! What a hill to go
down! What a hill it is! Oh dear, dear, dear!"
床罩仙女没有回答。她从被子小山的另一面走下去,泰迪听到她的声音,又细又小,
消失在远方:“噢,天啦,天啦,天啦!这山真难下啊!这座山怎么这样啊!噢,天啦,
天啦,天啦!”

Then the door opened and his mother came in. She was looking rested,
and she smiled at him lovingly, but the little brown Counterpane Fairy
was gone.
这时门开了,妈妈走了进来。她看起来休息得不错,对着泰迪慈祥地微笑着。可是,
棕色的小床罩仙女却走了。

#7 疏桐 2011-10-31

诗歌部分翻得好有意思