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我译过的第一篇童话——风在歌唱

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楼主:相宜 2012-01-03

原著 [美]Carol Moore

这是1867年美国西部寻常的一天。呼啸的风包围茅屋,屋内的拓荒者一家继续工作,假装没听见。其实他们听到了风声。自从两年前的春天由费城启程,风就是他们在荒原的忠实伙伴。大风一路紧跟这支十家人组成的马车队,从苍黄的土地上扬起滚滚沙尘洒向人及一切东西,直到世间只剩一种色调一种声音。
  眼下蕾切尔坐在床边缝一床被子,她母亲埋头于屋子另一边的缝韧机前,双脚前后踩动踏板,同针头连动的拉杆飞转起来。室外风在纵横冲撞。地板上蕾切尔的弟弟妹妹玩着扑克牌,发出咯咯笑声。姐姐蕾切尔微微一笑。不过当她回头看母亲,笑容顿住了。
  蕾切尔感到父母工作太辛苦,他们很少享受在费城时的欢乐悠闲。如今父亲总在田野里;母亲在柴灶前备饭、用搓衣板洗衣、烤面包和缝衣服去镇上卖。蕾切尔记得母亲从前爱唱歌讲故事,后来她开始抱怨风与尘土,终于她停止抱怨,也停止歌唱。
  门推开了,是蕾切尔的父亲。他带进一股沙尘,他一边咳嗽一边擦额头的汗:“今天外头真热。”
  “我给你备好麦芽酒和面包。”他妻子回答。她从缝韧机旁起身去摆桌子。丈夫舒舒服服坐进椅子。
  “我在外面就闻到了。香味把我早早勾回来。我和莫莉、贝尔清理田埂的时候,你们还干了些什么?”
  “蕾切尔被子缝完了。”
  “哦?”父亲转头看着大女儿骄傲地展开作品。那是朵艳丽的花儿,丝线镶边。
  “绝佳的作品。”他频频点头。“我们星期六进城怎么样?你可以展示你的被子,你妈妈带上她的面包,我有一桶洋葱卖。”
  小孩子们兴奋得大叫,家中的男孩迈克尔绕屋跳起舞,踢腿击掌。欢呼不无理由:乘马车去20英里外的镇上一游,是这家人翘首以待的每月一次的盛事。
  内布拉斯加州沃萨镇不同于热切欢迎开拓者的其它小镇。这里新老建筑混杂,可容纳牛车的一条烂泥主路与木板人行道共存。较新的一幢楼属于百货商店,门卫是一个印第安木头人,旁边挂只鸟笼。一家人停下观赏笼里黄色的小鸟。
  踏入店堂,一应俱全,充满木材、肥皂及香料的气息。墙上陈列一排排板条箱瓦罐子,过道摆放一桶桶土豆苹果,店后部贴墙码着一卷卷布匹。弟妹在店中探奇,父母与老板谈论面包和洋葱,蕾切尔逛回外面看鸟儿。它羽毛黄亮亮,像尘土飞扬的天地间一颗小太阳。它从一根横木跳到另一根横木,极少站住不动,一边跳一边用眼打量蕾切尔。突然一片阴影罩住女孩,吓她一跳。她抬头看见一位印第安苏族武士,她心跳加快。印第安人偶尔进城以物易物,但屡遭店主压价。印第安人和白人移民之间存在的漫长战争史令所有人提心吊胆。不过这个印第安人和蕾切尔一样被鸟儿迷住了。他专注地看,说些她听不懂的话。望着她疑惑的脸,他用英语重复:“它在听风。”
  蕾切尔来不及考虑这话的意思,印第安人已转身走开。过一会儿她父母出来,已从窗户看到那个人。
  “你还好吧?”父亲问。
  蕾切尔点点头。“他只是在看金丝雀。”
  此时,小鸟昂首挺胸,唱出一个愉快的颤音。蕾切尔看见母亲的脸容光焕发。
蕾切尔用被子换下金丝雀,毫不后悔,因为这小鸟带给他们无限快乐。大伙叫它“勇士”。他确实在对抗狂风,风声越大他歌声越响,激烈的斗争有时引得人们哄堂大笑。勇士振作了人们的精神,沙尘天变回艳阳天。
  蕾切尔思索着印第安人的话。她也听见风声,却从未像金丝雀那样仔细倾听。现在她努力就能听出呼啸风中的音符。当然,音乐微弱潜藏,需要她动用想象力,但只要她用心听,音乐一定存在。她哼起听到的音律。一天母亲说:“真好听。那是什么歌?”蕾切尔不回答,不确定该怎样解释。母亲没有逼问;很快自己也开始哼唱。
  有时候,单身的牛仔在小屋外止步,购买面包或缝补衣裳。他们总受到欢迎,不是因为他们口袋里的钱,而是因为他们的陪伴。平原上是寂寞的,20英里不见一户邻居。主客间交换新闻,分享美餐,欣赏勇士的小夜曲——他常成为中心话题。
  一个下午,最小的女儿玛丽注意到金丝雀坐在横木上一动不动。“勇士病了?”她警觉地问。
  “不,只是外面天阴。”母亲宽慰她。“快下雨了,他或许不想唱。”
小孩子们接受了这一解释,蕾切尔除外。她知道虽然勇士有时停止唱歌,还会在笼内跳来跳去。她走到门边眺望户外。静悄悄的,没有风声,没有鸟呜,也没有草原野狗的吠叫。她望见北边田野里父亲与两头牛的身影,同时望见黑色的雷雨云堆积高空。空气压抑令人难受。
  印第安人的言语回响在她脑海,“它在听风。”
  蕾切尔想着勇士的古怪举动和感觉多么奇怪的乌云。她凝神谛听,耳朵捕捉到细微的颤动,那是雷声。
  蕾切尔猛然醒悟。她断定大家处于危险中。“妈妈,龙卷风来了!”她大喊。
  玛丽和迈克尔立刻尖叫起来,母亲聚拢他们,带上勇士冲到室外。最安全的地方是房子旁边的蔬菜地窖。母亲推开地窖门,叫蕾切尔去警告父亲。
  蕾切尔撒腿跑过原野,边跑边挥舞手臂,没到一半已引起父亲注意。
  “出了什么事?”他高喊。
  她过一会儿才跑到:“龙卷风!”
  他双眼巡视地平线:“我什么也没看见,不过我会带莫莉和贝尔离开。我马上回家。”
  “不!没时间了。听!”蕾切尔近乎歇斯底里地说。由于她从不撒谎或调皮捣蛋,父亲按她所讲做了。终于听见雷声的时候,他加快行动,解下牛的套具放它们跑,自己拉着蕾切尔的手飞奔。待抵达茅屋,龙卷风已清晰可见,雨点浇透父女的身体,雷在头顶空中轰鸣。
    龙卷风仅持续数分钟,却像持续了数小时。一家人从藏身处钻出来时,欣慰地发现茅屋完好无损。水牛也幸运逃过此劫。阡陌交错的地面表明北边田野正是龙卷风路径的中心。庄稼损失会让日子更困难,不过大家庆幸能够活着。他们还觉得,神是通过一只小黄鸟传达谕示。

女士站在阁楼门口,叹口气。幽暗的光线下,屋子蒙满灰尘,堆积着老旧的家具、盒子及无数被遗忘的纪念物。她从外祖母蕾切尔手上继承这些东西,现在得决定每一件的命运。一台老式缝韧机将她吸引住,老到还装有一只踏板。她拉开顶层抽屉。在扣子、针线、剪刀当中,有一卷用丝带捆得整整齐齐的蕾丝布。她好奇地拿起来打开,惊奇发现是一只金丝雀的标本,身体早已干枯,但保存完好。她困惑地凝视着右手里的东西,左手不知不觉放到心口上。

(本人发表于《童话世界》2010年第6期)

#2 相宜 2012-01-03

附上原文,木民交流!英文比我译文美得多。

Wind Song

It was a day like the day before and the day after. The wind wrappeditself around the sod cabin in gusting moans as the pioneer family withincarried out their tasks pretending not to hear. They heard the wind, however.It had been their constant companion on the open plains since their journeyfrom Philadelphiatwo years before in the spring of 1865. Following the covered wagon train often, the wind had lifted the drab landscape into billows of dust falling oneveryone and everything until there seemed but one color and one sound.

Now Rachel sat on the bed hand-stitching a quilt whileher mother hunched over a sewing machine across the room rocking her feetbackwards and forwards on a foot treadle that turned the shaft that moved theneedle. The thumping counter pointed the wind outside. Laughter and gigglingerupted from Rachel's younger brother and sister playing jacks on the floor andit brought a smile to their sister's face, but when she glanced back at theirmother she stopped smiling.

Rachel felt that her parents worked too hard. Theyrarely had fun or relaxation like they had enjoyed in Philadelphia. Now her father was always inthe fields. Her mother prepared meals on a wood-stoked stove, did the laundryon a washboard, baked flatbread and sewed clothes to trade for goods in town.Rachel remembered her mother singing and telling stories at one time but thatwas before she had begun complaining about the wind and the dirt and the mud.Eventually she had stopped complaining, but she had stopped singing, too.

The door swung open and it was Rachel's father.Entering in a puff of dust, he coughed and wiped his forehead. "Mighty hotday out there."

"Well, I've got ale for you and flatbreadtoo," replied his wife. She rose from the sewing machine and began settingthe table as her husband eased himself into a chair.

"I know. I could smell it from outside. Smelledso good I came in early. What else have you all been up to while I was clearingrows with Molly and Bell?"

"Rachel's done with her quilt."

"Oh?" Rachel's father turned to look as hisolder daughter proudly showed off her masterpiece. It was a cheerful bloomingof color with stitches outlining the squares.

"That's a mighty fine piece of work." Henodded. "How 'bout us going into town this Saturday. You can show off yourquilt, your mother can take her flatbread, and I've got a bushel of onionsready."

The young children whooped excitedly and Michael, theboy, began dancing around the room, lifting his knees and clapping. There wasreason for jubilation. The 20-mile trip to town in the buckboard was aonce-a-month affair to which everyone in the family looked forward.

The town of Wausa, Nebraska was not unlike otherlittle towns that had sprung up to welcome the pioneers. It was a mix of oldand new buildings with wood plank sidewalks and a wide main street of dirt toaccommodate trains of oxen. In one of the newer buildings was the generalstore. Guarding the door was a wooden Indian and next to it hung a bird cage.The family stopped for a moment to look at the yellow bird inside.

When they stepped into the store it was a universe allits own. There was the scent of wood and soap and spice. The walls were linedwith racks of crates and mason jars, and along the aisles were bushel barrelsof potatoes and apples. In the back neatly propped against the wall were boltsof fabric. While her brother and sister explored the store and her parentsspoke with the grocer about their bread and onions, Rachel wandered backoutside to look at the bird. So bright a yellow it was a miniature piece of thesun in that dusty place. It hopped from perch to perch rarely standing stilland as it hopped it kept its eyes on Rachel. Suddenly a shadow passed over thegirl and startled, she looked up to see a Sioux Indian brave. Her heart beatfaster. Indians sometimes came to town to barter although it was discouraged bythe shopkeepers. Such a history of warfare existed between Indians and whitesettlers that no one felt safe. But this Indian was as fascinated by the birdas Rachel. He stared intently and then said something she couldn't understand.Seeing her puzzled face he repeated in English, "It listens to thewind."

Before Rachel could think about what he had said, theIndian turned and walked away. Her parents appeared a moment later, having seenhim through the window.

"Are you all right?" asked her father.

Rachel nodded. "He was just looking at the canary."

At that moment the little bird lifted its head,swelled its chest, and sang out a joyous trill. Rachel saw her mother's facelight up with delight.

Rachel traded her quilt for the canary and neverregretted it because the little bird entertained them endlessly. Sir Gallant,they called him because he did battle with the wind. The louder the wind themore loudly he sang, competition so fierce that sometimes everyone burst outlaughing. Sir Gallant lifted their spirits turning dust days back into sunshinedays.

Rachel thought about what the Indian had said. She'dheard the wind but unlike the canary she'd never listened to it. Now when shetried she could hear music in the moaning. Of course the music was faint andhidden in the background and she needed her imagination, but it was there ifshe truly listened. She began humming the sounds she heard. "That's apretty tune" her mother commented one day, "what song is that?"Rachel didn't reply, unsure how to explain, and her mother didn't press thequestion. Soon she, too, began humming.

Occasionally bachelor cowpokes stopped by the cabin tobuy flatbread or to have their clothes mended. They were always welcomed, notfor the money in their pocket but for their company. With no neighbors fortwenty miles, it was lonely on the plains. The family and guests traded news,shared a meal, and were serenaded by Sir Gallant who was often the center of conversation.

One afternoon the younger daughter Mary noticed thecanary sitting motionless on his perch. "Is Sir Gallant sick?" sheasked in alarm.

"No. It's just a dark day outside," hermother reassured her. "It'll be raining soon and he probably doesn't feellike singing."

The younger children accepted this explanation but notRachel. She knew that while Sir Gallant stopped singing from time to time, hehad always hopped about his cage. She went to the door and looked outside. Itwas deathly quiet, no wind or sounds of birds or prairie dogs. She saw theoutline of her father with the two oxen in the north field and at the same timeshe saw black thunderclouds stacked high into the sky. There was a heaviness tothe air and a prickly feeling.

The Indian's words echoed in her mind. "Itlistens to the wind."

Rachel thought about Sir Gallant's odd behavior andthe angry thunderclouds and how strange it felt. Straining to hear, she caughta faint rumbling and it was the sound of thunder.

Suddenly Rachel knew. She absolutely knew they were indanger. "Mom," she shouted. "It's a tornado!"

Immediately Mary and Michael began screaming as theirmother gathered them up and, along with Sir Gallant, rushed outside. The safestplace was the root cellar at the side of the house. Throwing open the cellardoors, the mother yelled to Rachel to warn her father.

Rachel took off running across the field shouting andwaving her arms, but not until she was halfway across did she get his attention.

"What's wrong?" he yelled.

It was another moment before she reached him."Tornado."

His eyes searched the horizon. "I don't seeanything, but I can bring in Molly and Bellanyway. I'll come back to the house."

"No! There's no time. Listen!" Rachel wasclose to hysterical and because she never lied or played tricks, he did as sheasked. Finally able to hear the rumbling he jumped to action. Releasing theyoke from the harnesses on the oxen he turned them free and then grabbedRachel's arm and they began to run. By the time they reached the sod cabin, thetornado was visible, rain drenched their bodies and a thunderous roaringpounded the air.

The tornado lasted only minutes although it felt likehours. When the family emerged from their shelter they were relieved to findtheir sod cabin intact. Fortunately the oxen, too, had escaped although thescarred earth proved the north field had been in the center of the tornado'spath. The loss of crops would make things more difficult, but they felt blessedto be alive. They also felt divine intervention had come in the form of alittle yellow bird.

The woman stood in the door of the atticand sighed. Gray and dusty in the half light, the room was filled with oldfurniture, boxes and a thousand forgotten memories. She had inherited itscontents from her grandmother and now faced the chore of deciding the fate ofeach piece. Attracted to an old sewing machine, so old that it had a foottreadle, she opened the top drawer. Amidst the buttons and needles and scissorswas a tiny bundle of lace neatly tied with ribbon. Curious she picked it up andunwrapped it. To her surprise she found she was unfolding the burial cloth of acanary, its body long ago dried up but carefully preserved. Holding it in herright hand she stared, perplexed, and quite unconsciously put her left handover her heart.