首页作品区诗歌花园[童诗童谣]

作者 晓晞 发表于 2011-01-31 浏览 979 回复 1 主题ID 54304
晓晞楼主
2011-01-31
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                                       做了一个好梦,
                                       走进梦乡,
                                       看见花开,
                                       一朵花开,
                                       一朵小花,
                                       平凡无奇,
                                       梦想自己是花仙子,
                                       无忧无虑的酿蜜······

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圆月饼
2011-02-01
#2

晓晞这首更像童诗
儿歌还是要韵律感强一些