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请教But whatever it was?

作者 卷毛头妈妈 发表于 2011-04-12 浏览 1053 回复 5 主题ID 55688
卷毛头妈妈楼主
2011-04-12
楼主

But one gray morning Brother and Sister didn’t get along well at all! Maybe it was the weather---or maybe it was because the mockingbird slept late. But whatever it was. Brother and Sister Bear got into a big fight…
不管是由于什么原因,小熊哥哥和小熊妹妹大吵了起来……

请问我的翻译对吗?

全部回复 · 5

慕容胖胖
2011-04-12
#2

我认为意思是对的,只是译文比较生硬,需要再改改。

卷毛头妈妈
2011-04-13
#3

修改了一下:
But one gray morning Brother and Sister didn’t get along well at all! Maybe it was the weather---or maybe it was because the mockingbird slept late. But whatever it was. Brother and Sister Bear got into a big fight…
不管是什么原因引起的,总之小熊哥哥和小熊妹妹大吵了起来……

淡化
2011-04-13
#4

还是生硬,全文连起来,你大声读一下吧。

慕容胖胖
2011-04-13
#5

管他为什么呢,反正兄妹俩大吵了一架……

咔咔……

疯长的幻想
2011-04-15
#6

管它怎么回事呢,反正兄妹俩吵了一大架。