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楼主:月若霜 2009-10-08

A LOVELY SUNNY DAYby Gordon Dioxide

It was a lovely sunny day in Oak Tree Farm. An 8-yearold boy called Tommy lay by the stream listening to the sounds of thecountryside. The birds were singing, the cows were mooing, the lionswere roaring, and the sheep were .....
Hang on, did I say lions?  Yes I did, and they were heading straight for Tommy.
Tommy stood up and saw the three fierce lions coming across the field.
He heard a noise behind him, and, lookinground, saw a grizzly bear stomping towards him. On his right were alarge number of tigers staring at him, and on his left, in the stream,was a crocodile.
There was no escape. Tommy didn't knowwhat to do. He thought for a moment and realised that the only way outwas downwards, so he got a spade and started to dig. But he couldn'tdig fast enough - the lions were rapidly approaching, the grizzly bearwas just a few feet away, the tigers were starting to move, and thecrocodile was snapping at his heels.
Suddenly, a spaceship flew down from the sky and picked him up.
"Phew, that was a close shave" thought Tommy.
Now he was flying through space at ahundred miles an hour. The spaceship was driven by two aliens, bothcalled Dave. They were green with large red eyes and yellow horns. Oneof them was wearing a T-shirt with the words "I've been to BuckinghamPalace and seen the queen" across the front. The other one wore anidentical T-shirt.
Tommy was pleased to have been rescued from the animal attack, but was a bit unsure about where these two Daves were taking him.
It was quite warm in the spaceship, soTommy asked if the heating could be turned down. Unfortunately, neitherDave was quite sure how the heating system worked so one of them openeda window instead. This was a big mistake because space is a vacuum andquite capable of sucking things out of spaceships. This is exactly whathappened to the two Daves - they were sucked out of the window, neverto be seen again.
Tommy shut the window and sat down at thecontrols. He'd never driven a spaceship before and was going to have tolearn fast, otherwise he'd be in big trouble.
He saw a red button with the letter R onit, and pressed it. The radio came on playing Wannabe by the SpiceGirls. Pressing a button marked W started the windscreen wipers, but itwasn't raining so he turned them off.
Eventually he taught himself how tocontrol the spaceship using the steering wheel and gear stick. Hebrought it down to Earth and landed in his back garden just in time fortea.
He told his mum about his little adventure, but she told him to stop telling lies and get on with his fish fingers.
Forty years later, Tommy was 48-years oldand he went on holiday to Spain with his family. While relaxing on abeach he saw two objects falling from the sky. They landed on histowel, and, on closer inspection, Tommy realised that it was the twoDaves! After all this time they had finally fallen out of space andback to Earth.
The two Daves were delighted to seeTommy, and Tommy said he would look after them. Now, although the twoDaves looked the same, they were in fact completely different. One wasclever, and one wasn't. Let's call them Clever Dave and Not-so-CleverDave.
Tommy said he would drive them to a shopto get some decent clothes. Tommy got in the driving seat, Clever Davegot in the passenger seat, and Not-so-Clever Dave got on the roof rack.When the car started to move, Not-so-Clever Dave fell off the back ofthe car. He had to chase after them, but as he wasn't very good atrunning he decided to catch a bus. He climbed on board the number 46bus and sat on the driver's lap. The bus followed the car all the wayto the clothes shop.
In the shop Clever Dave put on a niceblack suit and tie. Not-so-Clever Dave put a shirt on his legs, somesocks over his ears, a hat on his feet and some shoes on his shoulders.He thought he looked smart, but he actually looked quite ridiculous.
Then they went to a posh restaurant tohave a meal. Clever Dave picked up his knife and fork and ate his food.Not-so-Clever Dave picked up his food and ate his knife and fork! Heeven said it tasted delicious. For pudding, he had the tablecloth and alady's purse.
Not-so-Clever Dave had a lot of troubleadapting to life on Earth. He couldn't understand why people had to payfor things in shops, so he kept getting arrested for helping himself.
One day, the two Daves were making a cakefor Tommy's birthday. Clever Dave was mixing some flour and sugar,while Not-so-Clever Dave was mixing some eggs and dynamite. WhenNot-so-Clever Dave put the mixture in the oven, there was a hugeexplosion and both Daves were blasted back to space, never to be seenagain.
Tommy was sad to lose his friends, but tried to get on with life as best he could.
Another forty years went past and Tommywas now very old. One day, he was doing some gardening when he saw anaeroplane flying past. There seemed to be something hanging from one ofthe wings, so he got his binoculars to have a better look. Suddenly,whatever it was came free from the plane and started to float down tothe ground. It turned out to be two things, not one, and both of thosethings were Daves.
Tommy was delighted to see his oldfriends again, although it was a shame that Not-so-Clever Dave hadlanded on his flower bed. They went into the house and got something toeat, because both Daves were hungry after floating around space for 40years.
Tommy mentioned that he wished he wereyoung again, because being old can be a bit of a problem. Then anamazing thing happened. Clever Dave produced a pack of Magical WishingPowder and sprinkled it over Tommy.
Suddenly, Tommy was 8 years old again!He was lying by a stream in Oak Tree Farm and it was a lovely sunnyday. The birds were singing, the cows were mooing, the lions wereroaring, and the sheep were .....
Yes, thanks to Clever Dave, Tommy wasable to live his life all over again. This time though, he dug a bitfaster and escaped from the animals through a tunnel. In his secondlife he never met the Daves, but he always had happy memories of them...

Here are a few questions to see if you have been listening ...
What animals were attacking Tommy?
What were the aliens wearing when he first met them?
Where did Not-so-Clever Dave sit on the bus?
What did Not-so-Clever Dave mix into the cake?
Do you think aliens really exist?

#2 月若霜 2009-10-08

这是橡树农场阳光灿烂的一天。一个叫汤米的八岁男孩躺在小溪边,倾听着乡村的声音。小鸟儿在歌唱,牛儿哞哞,狮子大吼,羊儿咩咩……
等一下,我提到了狮子吗?是的,它们正在向汤米走来。
汤米站了起来,看到三只强壮的狮子在穿过田野。他听到身后有些动静,转身一看,一只灰熊在接近他。右边有一大群老虎在瞪着他,而他的左边,藏在小溪里的,是一条鳄鱼。无处可逃了!汤米不知道该做什么好。他想了想,认为唯一的出路是往下走,所以他拿起一个铲子,开始挖地。但是他挖的不够快,狮子眼看就要过来了,灰熊只在几英尺外,老虎也开始行动了,鳄鱼马上要咬他的脚后跟了!
突然间,一艘宇宙飞船从天而降,把他接走了。
“呼……,差点逃不出来了。”汤米想。
现在他正在宇宙中以一个小时一百英里的速度飞行着。操作宇宙飞船的是两个外星人,都叫戴夫。他们的皮肤是绿色的,有红色的大眼睛和黄色的犄角。一个穿着一件T恤衫,上面写着:“我到过白金汉宫,见过英国女皇。”另一个穿着一件一摸一样的T恤衫。
汤米很高兴能从动物们的袭击中获救,可是他不知道两个戴夫要把他带到哪儿去了。宇宙飞船里很热,于是汤米要求把暖气开小点。很不幸的是,没有一个戴夫知道怎么用暖气,于是他们打开了一扇窗户。这是一个很大的错误,因为宇宙空间是一个可以把宇宙飞船里的一切都吸走的吸尘器。这件事果然发生在两个戴夫身上,他们从窗户被吸走了,再也找不到他们了。
汤米关上窗,坐在操作台前面。他从来都没有驾驶过宇宙飞船,现在他必须要很快的学会,不然就糟糕了。他看到一个红色的按钮,上面有个字母"R",就按了下去。广播开始放辣妹乐队的甜柠檬之恋。他又按了一个上面有字母"W"的按钮,雨刮开始工作,但因为没有下雨,他就把它关掉了。
终于他自己学会了用方向盘和操作棒驾驶宇宙宇宙飞船,他把它开回地球,停到了自己家的后花园,正好赶上喝茶的时间。他告诉妈妈他的小冒险,但是她说不许他再说谎,让他乖乖吃他的鱼条。
四十年之后,汤米48岁了,他带家人去西班牙度假。在沙滩上休息的时候,他看见两个东西从天而降,他们落在了他的毛巾上,汤米靠近瞧了瞧,发现是两个戴夫!过了这么长时间,他们终于从宇宙空间中掉了出来,回到了地球。
两个戴夫见到汤米很高兴,汤米说他可以照顾他们。现在,虽然两个戴夫看上去一摸一样,实际上他们是完全不同的。一个聪明,一个不怎么聪明。我们就叫他们聪明的戴夫和不怎么聪明的戴夫吧。
汤米说要开车带他们去商场买些好衣服穿。汤米坐到了驾驶座上,聪明的戴夫坐在乘客的座位上,不怎么聪明的戴夫爬到了车顶上,车子一启动,不怎么聪明的戴夫就掉到了车子后面。他只好跟着车跑,但他又跑不快,于是他决定坐公车。他爬到一辆46路公交车上,坐在了司机的大腿上。公交车一路跟着汽车到了服装商场。在商场里,聪明的戴夫穿上了一身漂亮的黑西服,还打了领带。不怎么聪明的戴夫在腿上穿了一件衬衫,在耳朵上挂了几只袜子,在脚上穿了一顶帽子,在肩上搭了几只鞋子。他认为自己神气极了,实际上他看上去很奇怪。
接着他们去了一家高级的餐厅吃饭。聪明的戴夫拿起他的刀叉吃起了食物。不怎么聪明的戴夫拿起他的食物吃起了他的刀叉!他还说它们尝起来美味极了。甜点他吃的是桌布和一位太太的皮夹。
不怎么聪明的戴夫不能够适应地球的生活,他无法理解为什么人们在商场里要付钱才能买东西,他不停地因为乱拿东西被逮捕。
一天,两个戴夫在为汤米的生日做蛋糕。聪明的戴夫把糖和面粉搅拌在一起,不怎么聪明的戴夫把鸡蛋和炸药搅拌在了一起。当不怎么聪明的戴夫把他的蛋糕放进烤箱的时候,发生了大爆炸,两个戴夫又被卷进了宇宙空间,再也找不到他们了。
汤米因为失去了朋友很难过,不过他努力地继续好好生活。
又四十年过去了,汤米现在年纪很大了。一天,他在花园里做事,看见一架飞机飞了过去。一侧的机翼上似乎挂着什么东西,为了能看的更清楚,他去拿了自己的望远镜。忽然,那东西从飞机上掉了下来,慢慢的飘向地面。原来那不止一个东西,而是两个,两个戴夫。
汤米见到他的老朋友很高兴,虽然不怎么聪明的戴夫落在了他的鲜花床上。他们一起回到房里,找了些东西吃,两个戴夫在宇宙空间中飘了40年,实在饿极了。
汤米说起他希望能再年轻一次,因为年纪大了让他有些困扰。然后一件令人惊讶的事情发生了,聪明的戴夫作出一包魔法许愿粉,轻轻的把它们洒在了汤米的身上。
突然,汤米又八岁了!他躺在了橡树农场的一条小溪边,阳光灿烂。小鸟儿在歌唱,牛儿哞哞,狮子大吼,羊儿咩咩……
是的,感谢聪明的戴夫,汤米的生命可以重新来过一遍。这次他挖地挖的飞快,从地道里躲过了动物的袭击。在他的第二次生命里,他再也没有见过戴夫们,但他永远开心的保存着这份有他们的记忆。

听完这个故事,请回答下面的问题:
有哪些动物想要袭击汤米?
汤米第一次遇到两个外星人的时候,他们穿着什么?
不怎么聪明的汤米坐在公交车上的什么地方?
不怎么聪明的汤米在蛋糕里搅拌了什么?
你觉得外星人真的存在吗?

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第一次翻译,在网上找到一篇比较无厘头的,高手们见笑了。图片占位:http://rs.phpwind.net/E___5185ZHALPWFG.gif

#3 远行 2009-10-08

哈哈,挺可爱的无厘头故事。

#4 慕容胖胖 2009-10-08

偶是来欢迎新人的…… 表情占位:s:126

#5 慕容胖胖 2009-10-08

我喜欢这篇故事!

#6 囡囡妈 2009-10-08

欢迎新同学啊。。幻想国里最喜欢的就是翻译交流和讨论,尤其是挑刺!

grizzly bear——灰熊

汤米不知道该做什么好。他想了一会,——一会儿时间长了,这么紧急的时刻,想一下吧。

hecrocodile was snapping at his heels——要咬到啦~~

picked him up.——应该不是“接走”,是抓起他。。。这段是很紧张的,赫赫,翻出动感就有意思了。

Phew,that was a close shave——这句的意思不是讲“刚才好危险”啊,是形容脱险。。PHEW是舒口气的象声词,用“哦”好象不太合适。

fish fingers——是鱼条,炸鱼条。

表情占位:s:134 确实很好玩的一个故事,再润色修改修改吧,大声读一读。。这是BEDTIME STORY呢。

#7 远行 2009-10-09

那两个戴夫,能不能叫他们“聪聪戴夫”和“笨笨戴夫”啊? 
当然,我这么叫,可能就不是原文的那个味道了。 表情占位:s:138

#8 月若霜 2009-10-14

几天没来这么多回复,好开心啊。图片占位:http://rs.phpwind.net/E___4262ZHYXPWFG.gif

#9 月若霜 2009-10-14

引用:
引用第5楼囡囡妈于2009-10-09 04:18发表的  :
欢迎新同学啊。。幻想国里最喜欢的就是翻译交流和讨论,尤其是挑刺!

grizzly bear——灰熊

汤米不知道该做什么好。他想了一会,——一会儿时间长了,这么紧急的时刻,想一下吧。
.......
谢谢囡囡妈。其他几条都很有道理。
但是pick...up是有接的意思的,比如可以用pick someone up at the airport之类。
不过说抓起也挺好玩的,难以抉择啊。

在问一句,大家一般都是找什么来翻的阿。我都是在网上搜的,这个作家的大多数都无厘头,我很想翻一些优美的……

#10 月若霜 2009-10-14

引用:
引用第6楼远行于2009-10-09 21:42发表的  :
那两个戴夫,能不能叫他们“聪聪戴夫”和“笨笨戴夫”啊? 
当然,我这么叫,可能就不是原文的那个味道了。 表情占位:s:138  
我也考虑过聪明和笨,确实没有原文那种很无聊的感觉了。不过你这样翻的话可能小朋友会爱听?

#11 慕容胖胖 2009-10-14

“狮子在很快的靠近着”

我觉得这句话读着有点怪

我之前也想过要不叫笨笨啥的,但是,“聪明的”和“不那么聪明的”有另外一种的幽默。我觉得还是按照原文的风格翻的好

#12 慕容胖胖 2009-10-14

可以去看看这个帖子,里面有找童话的链接

../043/43516.html

#13 月若霜 2009-10-14

引用:
引用第10楼慕容胖胖于2009-10-14 22:46发表的  :
“狮子在很快的靠近着”

我觉得这句话读着有点怪

我之前也想过要不叫笨笨啥的,但是,“聪明的”和“不那么聪明的”有另外一种的幽默。我觉得还是按照原文的风格翻的好
要么说:
就快过来了……

#14 月若霜 2009-10-14

引用:
引用第11楼慕容胖胖于2009-10-14 22:57发表的 回 8楼(月若霜) 的帖子 :
可以去看看这个帖子,里面有找童话的链接

../043/43516.html

图片占位:http://rs.phpwind.net/E___5192ZHALPWFG.gif谢谢。